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June 30.2023
A Line Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Joseph May

 

Cool and calm is the evening breeze. Travelling miles, she brings us ease. On wings so fleet as a fairy she comes, Through woods and trees she sweetly hums. An impish visitor, the dancer of the sphere. An awaited presence, everyone’s cheer. Singing and dancing, hopping, and skipping, With the bells on her anklets ringing and tinkling. Across the corn she merrily moves. From where she alights, no one knows. None can see her but sense her touch. Shivering leaves fear her clutch. She travels downhill winding the dale. Swift and light, yet strong and hale Fevered minds, with a touch, she heals. Her nimble movements, everyone feels. At times she is gloomy and not at ease. "The silent song of the sighing breeze," Makes me wonder what makes her downcast, She seems to tell; life cannot be always a blast. Over land and water, she plays her tricks. Like a flash of lightning she swiftly flips, And furtively retreats to her far away nest, To regain her cheer and roam after a little rest
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Date: 7/12/2023 2:59:00 AM
Wondetful write Valsa, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/10/2023 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I was in your story/write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day writing away.....................
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:38:00 PM
amazing and beautiful scenery, enjoyed yann
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Date: 7/1/2023 3:59:00 AM
Wow! You skilfully wove this into a breezy tapestry, Valsa, mine pales in comparison...
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Date: 6/30/2023 1:21:00 PM
I am deeply enthralled by the exquisite artistry of your poetic composition, wherein resplendent metaphors grace each line. Your choice of diction holds an undeniable allure, captivating the reader's senses. The ethereal zephyr, enigmatic in its origin and destination, whimsically dances through your verses. Dear Valsa, your poem leaves one astounded, evoking a breathtaking experience like no other.
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Date: 6/30/2023 12:13:00 PM
Cool and calm is the evening breeze. Travelling miles, she brings us ease. On wings so fleet as a fairy she comes, Through woods and trees she sweetly hums--awesome opening lines to this splendid write, Valsa. You weaved the given line on the delightful tenor of evening breeze.
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Date: 6/30/2023 11:54:00 AM
Nice poem on summer breeze, I hope it is cooler by night.
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Date: 6/30/2023 9:21:00 AM
But the Lord is the true God; he is the living God, the eternal King. When he is angry, the earth trembles; the nations cannot endure his wrath. When he thunders, the waters in the heavens roar; he makes clouds rise from the ends of the earth. He sends lightning with the rain and brings out the wind from his storehouses. Jeremiah 10:10?, ?13 NIV. Love your poem, what a gift in expressing Gods power at hand , the beauty and graceful words of wisdom and knowledge.
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Date: 6/30/2023 9:03:00 AM
The fantastic breeze comes and goes, we know not where it came from or where it will go. Dear Valsa, your poem is astonishingly breathtaking. Your imagery as to be expected from you is always of the highest quality. A poem so pleasing.
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Date: 6/30/2023 5:39:00 AM
A very welcomed friend on a hot summer day also. Thanks for sharing this very descriptive work with us. Sara
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