Song of The Albatross No 13: AABB

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Couplet
Inspired: 2023 December 24
Image: Albatross by Britannica

Albatross | Largest Seabird, Migration & Conservation | Britannica

Edge what remains their last hope, be enshrined,
be the breeding atolls summoned to mind.
Albatross are one of the bird's largest.
These goliath's wingspans are the longest,
which makes them less of a landlubber when
they take more to the sea and less to land
other than breeding and nesting. They may
fly for more than a year well before they
take to land, which has been limited to
the northern Hawaiian islands, that's due
to its isolation. Their numbers put
them on the endangered list. The output
rests on less interference, to; control
by observation like fish in a bowl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/24/2023 9:07:00 AM
These beautiful sea scavengers are very large, fun to watch seagulls at the beach, they steal. lol. I enjoyed your poem very much William. Mele Kalikimaka! A Hau'oli Maka Hiki Hou 2024. Aloha Anaya
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Date: 12/24/2023 3:22:00 PM
Yes, they are all that, "beau ... large," Anaya. Thank you so very much, and do enjoy this holiday season and 2024, my friend. Aloha, William
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