Song of old age

Let me now sing the song of my old age,
All I recount now belongs to the past.
Since the noticed changes are far too vast,
Let this song be sung by a real sage.

This face, now so old, ugly, and wrinkled,
Once shone with a glow, bright and appealing.
Though no longer fine, smooth, and now peeling,
This same old skin was once never crinkled.

These eyes, now drooping, dimmed by poor vision,
Once sparkled with allure and shone pretty.
These hands were once fresh, smooth, and not gritty,
Though now shaky with loss of precision.

The mouth, now sunken and full of gnashers,
Was once bright in the glow of real teeth.
A life once like the vibrance of a wreath
Now whispers in the folds of old tatters.

These feet, worn and cracked, trudging so slowly,
Once romped in the bloom of youthful delight.
Though now calloused and bent, aching each night,
They carried dreams and walked them boldly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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January 21, 2025 at 1:15 PM
Back with Congrats!
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January 21, 2025 at 2:05 PM
I really value your taking the time to write this congratulatory message. Thanks a bunch.
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January 21, 2025 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. Way to go. Thank you for your participation. Sara K
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January 21, 2025 at 2:03 PM
Thanks for the comment and many thanks for hosting the contest and most importantly thanks for putting my work on the podium as one of the winners.
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 7:37 AM
I really like this one. You did it so well
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January 20, 2025 at 3:36 PM
You are such a loving soul. Thanks for your comment.
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