Song of a Common Man

REVISED
When I was young I ignored age
and never thought of passing time
or viewed the products of its rage
upon this changing face of mine.

At that age blessed through life to go,
to walk high peaks close to the sun,
and think the clock was moving slow
above where the dark valleys run.

Slower the step with shortened stride
descending to the lowlands lie,
a shadowed vale of mystery
wherein there flows eternity

Each one may think they know the path,
some take the preformed, preordained
to that truth when we breathe our last,
they bow the knee and mind the same.

But man evolved to have a brain
for independent thought and choice,
his birthright without binding chain,
compose his song and give it voice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thomas Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 5:59 PM
This is truly an enjoyable piece with great flow. And so much meaning to boot!
Howarth Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much Shadow, an appreciative audience makes the process of writing and submitting work so much more rewarding.
Babbit Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 12:25 AM
And a good voice you've provided.
Howarth Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 4:04 AM
Thank you DM, your comment is much apreciated
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