Kp Nunez Poet Rhyme

Song In the Night

A quiet night like this
Has its twin stilled
Yet echoes in my heart
A siren song
Notes find their way to yours
Till flesh is filled
With urgent steps for home
For each we long!








Kim Patrice Nunez
20 August 2015
Visual of a Verso Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2015 at 2:43 PM I was looking for a poem of yours to comment to, but found this older one that I never congratulated for its win. I had really liked it annd am glad it did well in the contest. Congratulations.

Lycia Harding September 5, 2015 at 7:48 AM Beautiful, Kim! Your work is always so moving. You are a true poet, my Dear. xoxo

Skat A September 1, 2015 at 11:44 PM Kim, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT

Paul Callus August 31, 2015 at 4:07 PM This is beautiful, Kim; I can feel the emotional tone and a romantic vein flowing through these lines. ~ Congrats on this worthy win! Hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 30, 2015 at 10:37 PM Very wonderful verse Kim! Congrats on awesome win!

Jan Allison August 30, 2015 at 6:12 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2015 at 10:23 PM I loved yours from the beginning, Kim. BIG congrats on the win.

Noel Villarosa August 25, 2015 at 3:13 AM Missing someone in a very conducive relaxed atmosphere. It is not enough to acknowledge what you feel but being in control of what you desire will make it happen right before your eyes. 7 (^_^) Noel.

Afolabi Muideen August 24, 2015 at 12:45 AM You penned this a great with vivid imagery. It is beautiful and excellence...... Stay blessed KIM.........LIGHT.............A.M.

Laura Breidenthal August 23, 2015 at 7:11 PM Awesome verse! You've really created a vivid picture with so few words. "With urgent steps for home For each we long!" Love it! Always, Laura

Demetrios Trifiatis August 22, 2015 at 5:30 AM Marvelously enchanting, dear Kim. A seven

Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2015 at 3:52 PM wow, this is a beauty! I just love seeing all the entries in this contest of Nette's!

Njeri Hunjeri August 21, 2015 at 9:11 AM Kim this is so Beautiful. Deep and full of emotion. This should do great in the contest 7x

Robert Lindley August 21, 2015 at 12:04 AM Short, deep, romantic and GREAT! Smooth too. Great poem, A7

Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 12:10 PM Dear Kim, awesome and adorable write....very nicely complimenting the picture....good luck :-).......love, Anu:-)

Emile Pinet August 20, 2015 at 11:40 AM You manage to capture a sate of being and wrestle it to the paper before is vanishes from your sphere of recognition. Emile.

Judy Konos August 20, 2015 at 11:17 AM Excellent.....simply excellent......

Tim Smith August 20, 2015 at 10:45 AM I sense a longing for your love to come to you. Fresh imagery Kim...good luck and as John says WoW...lol

Eric Boddie August 20, 2015 at 10:19 AM sounds of the purest Love....a thing so seldom heard of....echo softly through your words....I am glad I did observe....;)

Jan Allison August 20, 2015 at 8:28 AM so so beautiful Kim good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7 Kp Nunez August 20, 2015 at 8:37 AM :-))) I was at your house! Seems we were commenting on each other's poems at the same time. Thanks a lot, Jan! hugs!

Casarah Nance August 20, 2015 at 8:11 AM Oh well done, this was longing and beautiful.. Kp Nunez August 20, 2015 at 8:16 AM Thank you, once again, Cas! hugs!