Song and Dance of the Unborn Child

Center stage, the fertile womb
has room and walls. 
The fourth will speak to you
with thumps and heartbeats
Loud and clear :
"I am here!"
New life cannot be ignored...






I love my sons.
Aqua Marine. September 2024.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 9/17/2024 4:10:00 PM
This is precious. Too bad not so precious to those who favor abortions.
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Aqua Marine
Date: 11/16/2024 11:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support for the Unborn, Andrea. I have just posted a poem in support of the Unborn. It's a subject very close to my heart. Life is sooooooo precious! ((Hugs))
Date: 9/17/2024 5:59:00 AM
'ello stranger. New life cannot be ignored... but is often destroyed. Until the new world when all life will be honored
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Date: 9/17/2024 9:56:00 AM
Hi there, Friendly You! :D I've written a poem about that too... It's a looooooong one. Children miscarried, and aborted carry The Supreme Being's Design, never forgotten... He knows each one conceived, wonderfully made, as even David was well aware... Yes, I long for that new world too, where all bad Memories are forgotten. Forever! (Big Hug to you for stopping by..)
Date: 9/17/2024 3:55:00 AM
Hi Aqua, I noticed you on your Reply to Andrea. Nice poem - congratulations, has your fourth arrived yet. Hugs Maria
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Date: 9/17/2024 9:50:00 AM
Hi Maria, very kind of you to visit here, it made me happy to be here... I'm too old for more children, but I'll never forget the months before my boys were born (I have two adult sons...) The "fourth wall" is where an actor has a direct conversation with the audience. Unborn children let you know for sure they are there... Loved those bumps and thumps... Life is amazing! I treasured both of them before they were born. Still do xxxx(Warm Hugs)
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