Song

A song
is a speech with deep flavor
that can create heavens
cause great storms
gather gold riches
and make hearts shine like stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gist Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Yes indeed, and I love to write them!
Saxena Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:57 AM
nice attempt. very good
Dutta Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Nicely composed. It's impressive. Ilike the form. Best Wishes
Beck Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Well written...Good Flow
Harper Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 7:35 PM
Beautiful description, nice form
Daniel Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Wow! Beautiful poetry:)
May Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Beautifully expressed...very nice last line
Scythe Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 7:38 PM
Thanks.
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