Somnolent Eyes Awaken

with somnolent eyes
i fixate on these droplets
streaming down
my windshield
like lost tears
trying to find a path
to my lips
as i thirst for warmth

unanchored thoughts
adrift in my mind
falling harder
than this rain
of ashen skies
leave my lips
athirst in ardent desire
as they search
for the press
of yours

i linger
as i embrace desires
unfulfilled 

peering
through downcast eyes
at the tears
raining down
as they touch
my awaiting lips
less passionately 
than thoughts
had hoped for

i am somber
like this day

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Date: 3/16/2020 3:46:00 PM
Sandra, "athirst in ardent desire / as they search / for the press / of yours" to me, is the climax, bookended beautifully by images of raindrops and tears. The longing is summed up perfectly in the last two lines. Always love reading you. Congrats on your win today! Hugs ~ John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/17/2020 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much John... your comments are always so kind :) hugs
Date: 12/28/2019 4:35:00 PM
A sadness and a longing that are palpable, well done!
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Date: 12/28/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you so much John...my muse always does better with sadness... hugs
Date: 12/28/2019 4:18:00 AM
I feel the angst and sadness of this poem...You do deep emotions very well ..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/28/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you.... seems to be my specialty but i have to offer sensual words sometimes so people don't think i am a sad mess... hugs
Date: 12/27/2019 3:42:00 PM
Such sadness...
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Date: 12/27/2019 4:30:00 PM
my muse appears to excel in sadness... :)
Date: 12/27/2019 3:27:00 PM
Such a sad and lonely piece of writing. This echoes of pain and worry and a deep longing that aches. Sadly beautiful my friend.
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Date: 12/27/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Chris...it started out kind of happy but you know my muse...she turned it into sadness... hugs
Date: 12/27/2019 3:10:00 PM
sadness is a coat that becomes a shelter to peek out of and see the world through tearful eyes...my first thought dear poet...your poem touched me
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/27/2019 3:12:00 PM
to touch someone with your words is an honor to me... thank you Frederic.... hugs :)
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