Somewhere In Space, You'Ll Find Me

As I lay with my back against the grass,
I feel my body being absorbed by the earths firm and comforting surface.
I gaze into the heavens, watching the stories of millions of ideas displayed
within the stars and let my minds imagination
run with dreams held for countless years before me.
I feel a cool breeze lightly grazing over my body,
whispering songs of an overwhelming silence,
and in that moment, I become small and I am just a mind
floating on this mass
in an abyss of curious wonders,
oblivious to the depth of life in this abundance
in this universe of mysteries,
and I am simple,
and comfortably lost,
for just a moment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/8/2011 3:38:00 PM
WELL, GOOD LUCK WITH IT, AND IF YOU EVER NEED A FRIEND TO TALK TO, LET ME KNOW. I CAN BE ONE TO YOU IF YOU'D LIKE.
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Date: 5/7/2011 7:40:00 AM
this is how much i like this one!
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Date: 5/7/2011 7:39:00 AM
I DID CARE 4 THAT PERSON, BUT WE ARE NO MORE. SHE HURT ME BY GOING OUT WITH ANOTHER MAN. YOUR POEM SAYS ALOT AND I ADDED THIS 1 TO MY FAVORITES. WERE YOU SPEAKING OF SOME1 IN PERTICULAR? WHOEVER THEY ARE, THEY MUST BE A VERY SPECIAL PERSON AND VERY LUCKY TO HAVE SOME1 WHO CAN SPEAK WORDS LIKE THAT. NOT VERY MANY PEOPLE HAVE THIS GIFT TO SPEAK FROM THE HEART LIKE WE CAN. KEEP IT UP! HOPE TO READ MORE LIKE THIS 1!
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:56:00 AM
you have a different form of writing than I do, but I like it. If you get a chance, check my poems out sometime and give me your thoughts and comments on them please. They are under John Hembree, thanks.
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