Somewhere In Southern Texas

Is this a true story or a legend still believed by the locals? 

Somewhere in Southern Texas,
there's a small church with a white marble cross
which sways as desert willows...
when the crisp ocean's morning breeze  blows. 


The Spanish Missionaries built it
with rocks that rolled down the cliff 
to honor Christ, the conqueror of death...  
then the natives were converted by it.


Overlooking the Gulf of Mexico and hidden
among palm trees, this sanctuary was forbidden
to anyone who had an extra matrimonial affair,
and the one who disregarded it, would have died there.


How can anyone, who worshiped God with a bowed head,
have cursed this house of prayer where the faithful prayed?
Was he an excommunicate monk who had rebelled against the Pope?
Had that harsh punishment turned into vengeance tighter than a rope? 
 

It still remains a mystery linked to a superstitious legend causing disarray;
there was a well-known, lantern-lit den of witches not far away...
they sold potions in exchange for cornmeal and homemade Tequila,
and they got drunk every Sunday while the organ played, " Ave Maria."


Somewhere in Southern Texas,
I stand on the decaying steps
of a Baroque Church that angels still defend,
noticing the deep columns cracks filled with sand.


Written by Andrew Crisci
for Constance's contest,
" The Church By The Ocean "
October 1, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/5/2011 5:29:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on another outstanding win with this creative entry for Church by the Ocean my friend.. enjoyable read..luv..
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:30:00 AM
Well written. Congratulations on your win Andrew
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:33:00 AM
Not too shabby. Good for you.
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Date: 10/4/2011 3:22:00 PM
Very educational and alluring story..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2011 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 3:27:00 AM
What a stunning poem, Andrew. You brought this old church to life again in your description and shared a bit of true history with us as well. Even as the Spaniards were killing the Aztecs, they were erecting churches and listening to "Ave Maria." How's that for irony? Hope you entered this is the church by the sea contest. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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