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Somewhere In My Mind

I tried to write a song for you But words, I could not find. I knew that they were in there Somewhere in my mind. So I thought a poem A sonnet, perhaps some prose To profess how much I love you, Compare you to a rose. But my muse, she had deserted me I'd lost the will to write. So I'll just have to tell you, When I hold you close tonight. Entry for MID JULY 2018 STANDARD,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME, UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand. Placed 1st. 18/7/18

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Date: 10/1/2018 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations indeed, concise but full of emotions
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/2/2018 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Xuefeng :)
Date: 7/20/2018 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. This rhymes and flows, a love poem. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/21/2018 3:03:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 7/20/2018 9:23:00 PM
Gary, congratulations on your well written poem. The content is just beautiful and the picture is perfect. Hugs Eve
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/21/2018 3:03:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 7/20/2018 4:22:00 PM
This does flow like a song, congratulations on your win!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/20/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Michelle :)
Date: 7/18/2018 6:24:00 AM
I like reading this poem..It is very emotional!
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/18/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Rocell :)

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