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Somewhere I Called Paradise

Somewhere I called Paradise A voyage that starts in one dreary way The heart felt gloomy, mind got glum Though the eye sees an outside heaven An angel dances hypnotizing in some way The land I stared, in dreams I never knew Trees evergreen, sky, never been that blue The disbelief be thrown no longer exist Enchanted, hath seek for pleasure! Fear I posses yet I don’t heed The freshness f air lingers in within Falling leaves blown by the wind Far down in the water of crystal spring Floating and engulfing a heart of nothingness I can’t bear to hear the song of a nightingale It lavished upon my head and fantasy Bliss I enjoyed like a home that hungers me I bestowed it, letting my hand write a poem A writer shouting forlorn! Forlorn! Judas, don’t make it insane! Imbibe it’s beauty, please love it.. I thought death will cause pain But freedom in thy land like god’s vow It’s never a dream to wake me from sleep Standing in realm, and never thought of a paradise..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2016 10:18:00 PM
Joanna, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:08:00 PM
Joanna, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/3/2011 7:31:00 AM
Thanks @ Carol :)
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Date: 7/3/2011 7:30:00 AM
hey thanks :) @jun
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Date: 7/2/2011 1:30:00 AM
WELCOME !!! into the group of poets...too proud to be a Filipino..with this great poem...hope to read more from your real heartily creation and poetry masterpiece...enjoy this experience...write more... love-lots, jun-jun.... ^_^
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:40:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Joanna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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