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Somewhere Across the Sea

You belong to him
Wanting you the way I do
Hurts me beautiful
Far, so very far away
Come closer, come close to me…

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Jack Horne

September 22, 2013 at 3:47 PM

beautiful write, Tim

Sandra Adams

September 20, 2013 at 6:13 PM

poignant yet beautiful poem...one can feel the sadness linger after the read...nicely penned!

Nette Onclaud

September 19, 2013 at 12:09 PM

poignant with a hush so implictly suggested.. i like the chant-like feel of this, tim... very creatively rendered, sigh!.:) huggs

Carrie Richards

September 18, 2013 at 5:18 PM

You express so beautifully, what cannot be said aloud........but screams from the page.......... stinging, is the pain.

Skat A

September 18, 2013 at 1:25 PM

Nicely pinned Tim, never set it free. No matter who's holding the dove. You seem a little down. I got your super duper soup mail. sending one right back at ya. tc. SKAT