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Another child lay dying in his mother's arms, She holds him to her- weeping hopelessly; There will be no ambulance coming, no alarm, And this scene plays out each day endlessly. She holds him to her- weeping hopelessly, The writing is on the wall for the starving; And this scene plays out each day endlessly, We give to charity because of ads appealing. The writing is on the wall for the starving, Thumbs up we say, we are saving the world; We give to charity because of ads appealing, The money given- into the wind it whirled. Thumbs up we say, we are saving the world, Somewhere over the rainbow plays in my head; The money given- into the wind it whirled, I pray this boy finds that blue bird when dead. Somewhere over the rainbow plays in my head, There will be no ambulance coming, no alarm; I pray this boy finds that blue bird when dead, Another child lay dying in his mother's arms. _______________________ April 16, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/Somewhere Copyright Protected, ID 16-778-504-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Lyrics, cliché, Image, sponsor, Silent One (Image #1) theme used- somewhere over the rainbow lyrics cliche used - the writing is on the wall First Place

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Date: 5/18/2016 12:41:00 AM
Congrats Broken Wings on your win in the contest. Great Pantuom. Best wishes, RP.
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Date: 5/14/2016 10:11:00 PM
Broken, this is fantastic and absolutely says it like it is. There is so much money donated for helping the needy through ads and solicitation which only goes to line the pockets of the unscrupulous. Am sure even if the adspend for one day was rightly spent on the needy things would improve greatly. But in the meantime, the mom can keep on waiting for the ambulance till her boy goes beyond the pale. Great poem. Congratulations on your fine win. ~karam~
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:30:00 PM
Such a sad poem, but beautifully written Constance. Congratulations on your win !!!
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:15:00 PM
So many sad lullabies ...Congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:12:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, congratulations on your First Place win for your very sad, and emotional Pantoum. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/14/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/14/2016 4:11:00 PM
Congrats BW.... i can actually hear the song playing to this lovely poem
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Date: 4/17/2016 12:38:00 AM
such a painful scene written wonderfully through your gold pen, constance... soupie mail for you... huggs!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2016 10:22:00 PM
Nette, thanks for visiting and the wonderful, yes it was a very sad image~
Date: 4/16/2016 9:20:00 PM
Nicely done.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/17/2016 10:23:00 PM
Timothy, thanks for the compliment !

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