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Sometimes the Sky

sometimes the sky will tear open at night and stars will just pour out like rain I am full of holes now from their searing plunge I was never smart enough to step out of their way or hide beneath a tree or simply go back inside and close my window to the stellar pain I am older now and you’d think I would have learned or am i like you infatuated with the night and simply love the way a star passes through

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Date: 3/29/2016 10:57:00 PM
This was so captivating, J. I adore the intensity and the way your mind works ... tearing open holes into your being with the beauty of the stars. And your title was begging to be clicked because it is in an incomplete thought ... Sometimes The Sky ... well my friend, Sometimes Tudor will tear out a pen And ink will just pour out like rain (experiencing a lovely trickle currently, and awaiting further installments .... :) )
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Date: 3/26/2016 1:48:00 PM
You have a poets mind, J. Tudor. :) john
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J. Tudor
Date: 3/27/2016 5:19:00 PM
On occasion, perhaps.!! : ) J.
Date: 2/23/2016 12:28:00 PM
Oh the glory of it all...to stand beneath a starry night. You have a very unique style...very captivating. Love it!!!! Sincerely, Elaine
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/24/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank You Elaine...for the very kind response. J.
Date: 2/22/2016 9:56:00 PM
Enjoyed very much your poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/23/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank You Nayda...I have been enjoying yours as well.
Date: 2/22/2016 8:35:00 PM
I really respect people who can do free verse. I'm too much of a type A person, I need the structure and meter. I enjoyed the imagery, and was forced to think about the mistakes I never learn from. Thanks for sharing!
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J. Tudor
Date: 2/22/2016 8:49:00 PM
Thank You Daniel. I do write a lot of metered rhyme and also find a great enjoyment in the structuring of a piece, it makes me feel more "grounded" in a manner of speaking. I appreciate your comment.

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