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Sometimes, Sadly

There exist some souls with deranged minds - psychopathic narcissists and sociopaths who never can change. Something got twisted inside them and it invaded their brain. Strange hideous thoughts seem to follow them since their youngest days. They stalk; they punish; they kill. Their pleasure is another’s pain. Love they cannot give, for love they cannot feel although they may be talented at mimicking affection. Those with the misfortune of being their kin or those having been sucked into their initial charming graviational force and fall too quickly in love with them will one day learn a lesson (and hopefully not tragically): Sometimes, sadly, love is not enough. Sept. 10, 2019 for Silent One's 'Sometimes love is not enough' Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/17/2019 9:56:00 PM
It's a tough subject you chose, Andrea, but you hit it on the nailhead-- congrats on your win
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Date: 9/17/2019 3:13:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/13/2019 7:41:00 AM
When love's replaced with bitter scorn. Nothing but hate will then be born. That tender place of Cupid's aim. Now turned to stone, never the same. Yes sadly, sometimes love does not win. So we pray for strength against the sin. Pretty powerful poem you've written here girl. <3 :)
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Date: 9/12/2019 9:04:00 PM
Wow Andrea … this verse of yours has the feel of fear and despair which sadly is the way of life in some families and communities. It's hard to comprehend the human mind when we read about some deeds that are senseless - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 9/12/2019 3:23:00 PM
Great one Andrea! Right on. Panagiota
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:41:00 PM
This is such a different approach to this contest - Love they cannot give for love they cannot feel - a very creative write Andrea - good luck in the contest! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/12/2019 10:59:00 AM
mimicking affection... yep. so true. Love not enough. Oww... painful. true again. Hugs for your day. I love this poem. Ann
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Date: 9/12/2019 8:24:00 AM
Wow... this is such an original. I love what you did with this contest. Awesome entry and best for it. Blessings to you.
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:15:00 PM
Your poem reminded me of the serial killers that seem so normal yet they are anything but. A great entry for the contest Andrea!
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:42:00 PM
We often wonder how people become "twisted" in this fashion. Some are raised in close-knit families. It would be hard to fall for such people, but even harder to stay with them after we see the type of people they are. A tender, touching poem that should do well in the contest, Hon. Wishing you success! Hugs, carolyn
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/12/2019 4:53:00 PM
I almost believe at least a few of them are just "born that way" kind of like what was depicted in "the bad seed" Very weird how one can be in a family of completely normal and wholesome kids but end up the killer among them.
Date: 9/11/2019 1:19:00 PM
"They stalk; they punish; they kill. Their pleasure is another’s pain." - so well done, Andrea. Bravo my friend!
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Date: 9/11/2019 10:40:00 AM
so very true this one is...some people are incapable of love but good con artists, the victims love them deeply but eventually realize love is not enough...good write :) hugs
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Date: 9/11/2019 9:20:00 AM
Very powerful and disturbing. A good take on the theme.
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Date: 9/11/2019 5:30:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This is a great take on the contest theme. When in love or when you love someone, love can be blind. No one wants to believe that someone they love could be like you so brilliantly described. I had know doubt that you would write something good. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/11/2019 4:20:00 AM
Powerful verse that is full of truth Andrea. Tom
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:45:00 PM
Dramatically effective and descriptive, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:42:00 PM
Save this as authority to write Donald Trump's Obituary! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:41:00 PM
hard hitting poetry dear poet...good luck
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:38:00 PM
So true--so real life, Andrea--some indeed don't deserve the hand of genuine love, given their disposition to disrupt and destroy. Well said, Andrea.
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Date: 9/10/2019 5:15:00 PM
a brilliant take on the theme of the contest, andrea! this is so sad but something we witness more and more these days...
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Date: 9/10/2019 4:14:00 PM
Love is vital but cannot change all situations as you point out clearly in your stimulating write. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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