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Sometimes Love Is Not Enough

Sometimes love is not enough, Like melting wax on a candle As it's burns, vanishes into a kiss. You pour every ounce of love Hoping that what you give Will come back to you. Those that love too much Are the ones that get hurt, But, They're the center of your universe. Like An Ocean is not an ocean Without briny breeze. The nascent, lulling movements From its eternal depths; The seagulls that soar above her surf. Where the murmur ambience Above the endless horizon Meets the indigo sea. Where the brimming laden stars flicker, Whirl loud beneath a bright blue sky And the green blade of the herbal sweet sedge. Where, in and out the bees, butterflies, And hummingbird flutter to savor Nectar from a chalice of fragrance of flowers. There is no shame in crying tears Where love is not enough Fall to the living soul Mood as gray as the sky, Which the sun finishes. Slowly, leisurely with pure contentment Romance to whom love will be The taste of wine And stroll upon her beach alone. 9/9/2019

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Date: 9/17/2019 2:50:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/14/2019 11:04:00 PM
I loved this and wanted to say Congratulations and blessings
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Date: 9/14/2019 2:29:00 PM
- Congratulations with your beautiful contest poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2019 1:15:00 PM
Beautiful, utterly beautiful ...sending many congrats for your top place in SO's contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/14/2019 12:16:00 PM
The last stanza is particularly good filled with words that sooth the ear. Congrats on you deserved win.
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Date: 9/14/2019 11:25:00 AM
This is a wonderful, deep and emotive poem and I felt every word... there is no shame in crying tears, where love is not enough.. because so many times it is not.... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 9/12/2019 6:56:00 PM
You captured the longing. This is well expressed Eve.
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Date: 9/10/2019 9:59:00 AM
amazing sweet Eve, loved every word and I think SO will too :) good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 9/10/2019 8:29:00 AM
Great imagery Eve. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:53:00 AM
Wow, this was fantastic. I loved everything about it. You have outdone yourself here my friend. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/10/2019 3:53:00 AM
A wonderful write...I enjoyed it
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Date: 9/9/2019 11:34:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Eve.
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