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Sometimes, it just takes some time

Sometimes, it just takes some time Sometimes, we are born, with big dreams Sometimes, we are born having none Sometimes, we have to live, with our troubles Sometimes, we do things, that can’t be undone Sometimes, our hearts, may be broken Sometimes, we find true peace and love Sometimes, words are better left unspoken Sometimes, you leave when you’ve had enough Chorus Sometimes, it just takes, some time for all of your dreams to come true Sometimes, it just takes, some time to find the perfect one, meant for you Sometimes, it just takes, some time being apart ‘til the storm subsides Sometimes, it just takes, some time a little patience, while the future unwinds Sometimes, the cards, we’ve been dealt with don’t add up, and are just not enough Sometimes, we’re anxious, and worry too much Sometimes, we’re blessed, with a tender touch Sometimes, the money comes too easy Sometimes, we may not have enough to eat Sometimes, life throws us a curve ball Sometimes, this life is bittersweet Chorus Sometimes, it just takes, some time for all of your dreams to come true Sometimes, it just takes, some time to find the perfect one, meant for you Sometimes, it just takes, some time being apart ‘til the storm subsides Sometimes, it just takes, some time a little patience, while the future unwinds Finale Sometimes, it just takes, some time a little patience, while the future unwinds Sometimes, it just takes, some time a little patience, while the future unwinds John Derek Hamilton June 12,2018

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Date: 11/3/2018 7:02:00 PM
Since you wrote this somewhat like a song, have you considered what genre of music it could possibly be sang in? I like this poem of yours.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/4/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Miranda, yeah this song is already recorded, it's kind of like Hootie and the blowfish, sort of a soft rock ballad, I'm just waiting for the go ahead to post the music for it!
Date: 7/4/2018 8:11:00 AM
Ahh, you are absolutely right, we just need to bare everything with patience and have trust in God, when the things are going our way, we should bow down and thank God, when the things are against us, just have patience that tje help is surely on the way, it was a really beautiful poem with a really deep message, good luck and have a really nice day
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/4/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Faraz, I appreciate the visit and support!
Date: 6/19/2018 8:08:00 PM
Very well done! This I like, struck something in me. A fave.
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/19/2018 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Susan, you faved my two personal faves of my posts this month, coincidence, I think not!
Date: 6/16/2018 5:03:00 PM
sounds good to me.. awesome lyrics ;)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Cas nice to see you active again!
Date: 6/16/2018 2:07:00 PM
Oh I love this one John! A favorite :) Very nice!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/16/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, sometimes we like the same songs! lol!
Date: 6/16/2018 1:51:00 PM
sometimes you read a fabulous lyric that resonates with you ...I've just found the perfect example:-) adding this gem to my faves John:-) Going to have this awesome lyric going round in my head for a long time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2018 4:37:00 PM
Sometimes, you read a great comment, and sometimes you say Thanks Jan!lol!