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Sometimes I Wonder

Sometimes I wonder about you Since you decided to move on It took a lot of time for me To accept, you were really gone I made you laugh, I eased your pain I did all I could think to do You chose a bully over me And your fathers money too! I can't love and then forget But a heart is so adaptive To dull the pain of what was lost That which, held my heart captive You were what I loved the most Then I found my true connection Life runs so much more smoothly Moving in the same direction! I once thought it impossible That I'd be over you at all But now you're just a post it note On my minds, past memory wall!

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Dean Wood

Date: 9/24/2019 10:22:00 AM

An emotive poem Pat. Brings back some bitter-sweet memories of my own. Hope you have a great day. Regards, Dean

Pat Adams
Date: 9/24/2019 12:40:00 PM

Sometimes what is lost reminds us of what we have that's so much better!!..............pat

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/17/2019 6:30:00 PM

G'day PAT … romance gone wrong can open a door to a wonderful new world if you let it, and just keep the memories - nice verse indeed PAT - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 4:20:00 PM

True enough my friend. Have a great day!....pat

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/15/2019 5:01:00 PM

Such good reading, Pat, and something new of yours??? Her loss.

Pat Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 2:46:00 PM

A new poem about a lost love a long time ago. Devastating at the time but obviously meant to be for I am happier now than I could ever imagine!...Life go's on.......80)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/15/2019 4:34:00 PM

this flows so smoothly, pat, and the rhyme is wonderful! the ending is very clever, too...

Pat Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Ilene. A departure from my usual silliness, that needed to come out I guess....pat

Hello There

Date: 9/15/2019 12:03:00 PM

I like this a lot, PAT, especially the ending ~ a post-it note on my mind's past memory wall... Needing a reminder that you once cared is a sure sign you have moved on <3

Pat Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Hello! Sometimes it's not easy......80)