Kash Poet Poet Rhyme

Sometimes Be Real

Sometimes go bare
sometimes be real,
secrets,I too will share
face to face in green room
before the make up
if you can dare.






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Placement- 5th (Oct 2013)

Contest-Poem of Compresson( Theme-Veil)

By-kash poet

Date- 2nd Oct.2013

Sponsor--Nette Onclaud


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Compresson Poem---Rhyme Scheme a/b/a/c/d/a, syllable count-- 4/5/6/6/5/4

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Michael Ainsley October 29, 2013 at 9:22 PM Well done Kash

Charmaine Chircop October 13, 2013 at 3:30 PM A well deserving win kash...This poem speaks on its own.Excellent.Tnks for visiting ..much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2013 at 8:03 AM I like this one a lot. Congratulations Kash.

Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2013 at 8:27 PM Kash... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Delysia Hendricks October 10, 2013 at 7:55 PM Yes, I agree with you, Kash. Why hide behind trappings? Lovely win, my friend. I hope your birthday was a good one. I wish you many, many more. Licia :-)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 9, 2013 at 10:06 AM Kash, congrats on your winning poem! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A October 8, 2013 at 8:23 PM Kash. lovely win........SKAT

Shanity Rain October 8, 2013 at 8:11 AM Excellent ! a winner to me , less said yet brilliant .

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2013 at 5:29 AM Be real..Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats on your win..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2013 at 3:40 PM - Happy birthday, Kash!! <3 <3 <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2013 at 3:11 AM and a HOP- HOP HAPPY birthday to one of my greeat buddies... where to, kashi?.. shake it, friend!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2013 at 6:14 PM Kash, I'm wondering if you are celebrating the 7th already.. I have 6 hours to go. NOT THAT I'M COUNTING.... lol ;) Happy Birthday Kash... hope you are having a great time... PSSSS...I really like this, deeply pened.....xox~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2013 at 1:31 AM WAY to GO, my friend, a big congrats to you on your win.

Joyce Johnson October 5, 2013 at 10:29 PM Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2013 at 2:12 PM somehow, i see a pinch of humor here, akshi bud... congrats on your win in my contest.. check my blog about it..:) huggs

Carrie Richards October 5, 2013 at 10:32 AM Congratulations again, Kash.......and I would not be here on the list, had you not caught my syllable mis-count. Once again, I owe you , my friend! Always so grateful.....thanks so much!

Juli- Michelle October 4, 2013 at 3:53 PM I really like this. The hidden story behind the words is eating away between the lines. I love when poems create that effect. Great write! Love, Juli-Michelle

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2013 at 2:21 PM Unique and wonderful,Kash ! - Luck in contest! - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards October 3, 2013 at 8:40 PM It is not always easy to unveil our real selves........but this is a good example to those who hide behind a false front. Honesty comes in many forms! :) Good one!!

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2013 at 3:50 PM sorry , Kash. thanks for letting me know. I had not known that you guys used the word green room same as we do. the poem makes perfect sense in that context. I LOVE it.

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2013 at 3:28 PM And did you mean make-up, like cosmetics? or make up like getting back together? by the way, I was curious why you put ? at my poem. and also wanted to tell you thanks for that one invitation you gave me in hotmail but I don't really understand those things. For example, the one called LInkeden, I don't do that one either. I am registered there but don't understand it and Debs keeps inviting me to hers!!

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2013 at 3:26 PM Hi, Kash, what is the significance of the green room for you? Here it means a room where you wait before a television appearance. Is it something like that? I like your poem, just want to understand it better.

Eileen Manassian October 2, 2013 at 10:23 AM AWESOME!!! Kash...if only we dared! Wonderful poem...GOOD LUCK!!!

Russell Sivey October 2, 2013 at 9:28 AM This is a beautifully created write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a lovely piece, masterfully crafted poem, Great Work!!