Sometimes

sometimes

I dream of late
while sound a sleep
or wide awake
of who, and what, and
where and when, 

I am

to see the wonders we 
have wrought yet others 
pending deeper thought.
minds to come that hold
the keys to the making of 

you and me.

one question still abides
it swirls around in my insides
when we have answered 
all of our questions, what 
will be the last dimension 

us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Heavy write, Pat! Love the mind-bending quintessential existential musings. Can you take me w/you on that rarefied elevated plane you are standing on. Splendid poetry, my dear friend. Love and smiles always.
Cresswell Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Not rarefied Freddie just need to stay still long enough for the thoughts to catch up. you are welcome any time.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 7:59 AM
A mind probing pen love xomo
Cresswell Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Very gentle probing I hope.
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 7:03 AM
I found this poem deep in introspection--very well written!
Cresswell Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Vijay.
One Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Good ending, I guess sometimes we have no answers to our questions.. Great pen Patricia..
Cresswell Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Doesn't stop us from asking.
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