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Sometimes

sometimes

I dream of late
while sound a sleep
or wide awake
of who, and what, and
where and when, 

I am

to see the wonders we 
have wrought yet others 
pending deeper thought.
minds to come that hold
the keys to the making of 

you and me.

one question still abides
it swirls around in my insides
when we have answered 
all of our questions, what 
will be the last dimension 

us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/30/2017 2:31:00 PM
Heavy write, Pat! Love the mind-bending quintessential existential musings. Can you take me w/you on that rarefied elevated plane you are standing on. Splendid poetry, my dear friend. Love and smiles always.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:24:00 PM
Not rarefied Freddie just need to stay still long enough for the thoughts to catch up. you are welcome any time.
Date: 11/30/2017 7:59:00 AM
A mind probing pen love xomo
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:16:00 PM
Very gentle probing I hope.
Date: 11/30/2017 7:03:00 AM
I found this poem deep in introspection--very well written!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 11/30/2017 6:29:00 AM
Good ending, I guess sometimes we have no answers to our questions.. Great pen Patricia..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 5:11:00 PM
Doesn't stop us from asking.

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