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People annoy me. Really; Get away from me! It's not you, It's me. Once In A Blue; Behind my Baby blue- Eyes, I hide... SECRETS! (That) Sometimes-I-wish-I-was-you. Even though, You annoy me. It is me That you; Annoy. Leave me alone! Please!? My air…, THIS IS MY AIR! You can't…; have-it! I won'-t... Let-you! Am I actually guarding my own territory? Like a Dog…? Scared-E-cat; Hiding from yourself Once in a blue; Eyes that you lie through your teeth with. Once you lie with your teeth; Blue eyes That are misleading; To say the least- Rolls down hill- Eyes roll as your teeth lie. Bad attitudes spread like… --Sexually transmitted diseases-- Sometimes, This mentality rolls… Downhill. Affecting us all and landing on the very… Bottom; We are all down there. We all start there. The very bottom; You forgot, That; Sometimes... 4-18-15

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Date: 5/20/2017 1:11:00 AM
I got 3rd place with this poem in a contest about what annoys you...nice!
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Date: 6/4/2017 2:01:00 AM
I am happy with any placement or honorable mention.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2017 2:02:00 PM
Now tell me , are you annoyed you got third or just pleased to be on the winners list Ironic Zinc lol :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2016 2:08:00 AM
Lovely poem about human nature ! we all r vulnerable to lying sometimes n hiding the truth many more times ! I liked d simile in d lines:Bad attitudes spread like… --Sexually transmitted diseases--
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Date: 5/19/2016 7:08:00 AM
Thank You ;) Sometimes its best to just write. And sometimes you may shock even yourslef.

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