Sometimes

Sometimes it feels wrong inside, but I won't admit, Sometimes I just want to hide, cuz its you i miss, Sometimes I just wanna scream, and throw a fit, Someimes i wanna feel, cuz its this that makes it real, Sometimes I fall into a deep dark maz, and im trying to find a way to get out, to set myself free from this world i've created in my mind, something so bad, so harmful, a way to getr out is hard to find, Sometimes its hard to get out of situations i dont like, so i normally find a place to hide, I hid all my life, and now i will survive, all the pain LIFE caused inside

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Art Wright

Date: 1/16/2013 7:07:00 PM

You write with a great deal of feeling...very pure. I will look forward to more. thanks for the kind comments on my last poem. Best regards.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2013 6:23:00 AM

You've written a good poem, touching content. - Welcome to P-Soup, Nikta. - Hope you will get much joy of sharing your thoughts and poems here with us. - Visit our poem and give your comments, and you will get a visit back. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nikta Sol
Date: 1/16/2013 6:38:00 AM

hi, thanks..

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/15/2013 11:18:00 AM

Mood swing is a hell of a thing but I suppose if we didn't have them there would be harly any spirituality to us.Good offering and welcome to the soup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 9:44:00 AM

About your poem: sometimes I can't help but, feel like this inside... I'm like the poem above... i will not admit when things are and feel wrong. Sometimes hiding is good... but, i learned many years ago hiding is not good... this is a sad poem and thought... thank you for sharing always~LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 9:40:00 AM

Nikta, , stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here picking up and finding new poets to love, appreciate and adore. Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward into following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD"

Nikta Sol
Date: 1/16/2013 6:37:00 AM

hi PD and thanks