Sometimes

Sometimes my poems are funny Sometimes my poems make you think Sometimes my poems leave you puzzled And sometimes my poems… well they just stink

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/3/2023 5:03:00 PM

Think we all have those thoughts about our poems and the impressions they will leave. love phyl

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/16/2023 4:49:00 AM

Thanks for the laugh. I think that's pretty true for all of us David. Have a great day.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/16/2023 8:54:00 AM

This is an honest write for not only poets but for all creative people. Hey, sometimes what sounds like a good idea doesn't always pan out but you will never know until you try. A better poem than you think, David. Sometimes the simplest are the best!

David Grimm
Date: 3/16/2023 3:50:00 PM

Thank you, I welcome your comments/encouragement. I enjoy your poetry.

David Grimm

Date: 3/16/2023 6:57:00 AM

You mean I am not the only one to write bad poetry? Thank you for the comment.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/15/2023 9:23:00 PM

I’m sure I can relate to this. :)