SOMETIMES

Sometimes sun rays feel deliciously nutritious
in delightful ways upon my then titillated skin.
Sometimes early dawn’s ideal golden streaks
smolder atop the ocean in ways that awe me.
At those times, I flounder trying to unscramble
my power to articulate all my feelings convey.
When ocean waves cascade then fade crashes
with a blustering, continuing bombast-style,
it seems a brag of guile lacking any inhibition.
Sometimes my emotions sense a divine providence
of mysterious insist in a glorious, intricate sea.
Sometimes I feel an existing cryptic, dolorous and 
lecherous content equally miraculous in sea depths.
At all these times I feel with breezed emotional might
that I am truly focused as a neophyte of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Congrats on your very well deserved win, sweetie and I hope you are enjoying your vaycay. I am leaving in less than two hours. Sister Jenny picking me up with her husband to take me to my dad's funeral in WA . I am all packed and set to go and this is my one time to catch up on comments. See you hopefully by Sunday!
May Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 7:06 AM
Very nicely done CayCay.. Congrats on your win..
Proxenos Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 1:20 PM
CayCay - I just knew it - well done and congratulations dear friend. Love and hugs, Jenny.
Adams Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 12:31 PM
I am back to say congratulations on your fine win :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 12:15 PM
This is amazing writing Cay Cay, you are on a roll with another win, nice to have you back in full form, congrats for a deserved win!
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 3:49 PM
ohh my, this is so smooth and has an elevated feel to it, cay... i made one but yours is tops!... huggs
Adams Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 4:55 AM
Beautifully written! You did a wonderful job with the 8 word challenge. Good luck in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Caycay, yours is one of the BEST I have read using these words so creatively. Mine , as usual, is too much like prose. Yours is true poetry!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:23 PM
I like how you used your eight words with this passionate write. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
Godwin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:55 PM
I appreciate your comment and also thank you for the wish of good luck! Be blessed ... CayCay
Proxenos Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:12 PM
What an imaginative write CayCay - who writes overwhelming poems, poems that blow our socks off - you do my friend, a poem written by a true poet! Love and hugs dear CayCay, Jennifer.
Godwin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:54 PM
You're very sweet to me, Jenny - thank you now for your words and always for your presence ... CayCay
Michael Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 11:06 AM
In the life of "Sometimes" All the best CayCay
Godwin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 12:17 PM
Sometimes, maybe and vacillating are all me! Thanks Arturo! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Sands Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 6:56 AM
Very well written and also using those words! Excellent :)
Godwin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 8:07 AM
I appreciate your comments, Heidi! Many thanks ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 3:27 AM
sometimes I am astounded by the sheer brilliance of the way these difficult words are woven into a fabulous poem - well done CayCay this challenge is beyond my muse;s capabilities at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 8:09 AM
I'm glad your last sentence concluded with, "beyond my muse's capabilities AT THE MOMENT" because at any given moment you're capable of striking creative genius. Love having your comments, Jan - I thank you for them ... Hugs, CayCay
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