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Sometimes sun rays feel deliciously nutritious in delightful ways upon my then titillated skin. Sometimes early dawn’s ideal golden streaks smolder atop the ocean in ways that awe me. At those times, I flounder trying to unscramble my power to articulate all my feelings convey. When ocean waves cascade then fade crashes with a blustering, continuing bombast-style, it seems a brag of guile lacking any inhibition. Sometimes my emotions sense a divine providence of mysterious insist in a glorious, intricate sea. Sometimes I feel an existing cryptic, dolorous and lecherous content equally miraculous in sea depths. At all these times I feel with breezed emotional might that I am truly focused as a neophyte of life. ... CayCay June 11, 2019 written for a contest that required the following words: 1. Neophyte, 2. Inhibition, 3. Flounder, 4. Dolorous, 5. Bombast, 6. Lecherous, 7. Providence, 8. Smolder

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Date: 6/25/2019 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on your very well deserved win, sweetie and I hope you are enjoying your vaycay. I am leaving in less than two hours. Sister Jenny picking me up with her husband to take me to my dad's funeral in WA . I am all packed and set to go and this is my one time to catch up on comments. See you hopefully by Sunday!
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Date: 6/22/2019 7:06:00 AM
Very nicely done CayCay.. Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/21/2019 1:20:00 PM
CayCay - I just knew it - well done and congratulations dear friend. Love and hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:31:00 PM
I am back to say congratulations on your fine win :)
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:15:00 PM
This is amazing writing Cay Cay, you are on a roll with another win, nice to have you back in full form, congrats for a deserved win!
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Date: 6/13/2019 3:49:00 PM
ohh my, this is so smooth and has an elevated feel to it, cay... i made one but yours is tops!... huggs
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Date: 6/13/2019 4:55:00 AM
Beautifully written! You did a wonderful job with the 8 word challenge. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/12/2019 7:33:00 PM
Caycay, yours is one of the BEST I have read using these words so creatively. Mine , as usual, is too much like prose. Yours is true poetry!
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Date: 6/12/2019 1:23:00 PM
I like how you used your eight words with this passionate write. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/12/2019 1:55:00 PM
I appreciate your comment and also thank you for the wish of good luck! Be blessed ... CayCay
Date: 6/12/2019 1:12:00 PM
What an imaginative write CayCay - who writes overwhelming poems, poems that blow our socks off - you do my friend, a poem written by a true poet! Love and hugs dear CayCay, Jennifer.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/12/2019 1:54:00 PM
You're very sweet to me, Jenny - thank you now for your words and always for your presence ... CayCay
Date: 6/12/2019 11:06:00 AM
In the life of "Sometimes" All the best CayCay
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/12/2019 12:17:00 PM
Sometimes, maybe and vacillating are all me! Thanks Arturo! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 6/12/2019 6:56:00 AM
Very well written and also using those words! Excellent :)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/12/2019 8:07:00 AM
I appreciate your comments, Heidi! Many thanks ... CayCay
Date: 6/12/2019 3:27:00 AM
sometimes I am astounded by the sheer brilliance of the way these difficult words are woven into a fabulous poem - well done CayCay this challenge is beyond my muse;s capabilities at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/12/2019 8:09:00 AM
I'm glad your last sentence concluded with, "beyond my muse's capabilities AT THE MOMENT" because at any given moment you're capable of striking creative genius. Love having your comments, Jan - I thank you for them ... Hugs, CayCay

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