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Something To Cuddle Huitain

Every girl needs a teddy bear, mine’s blue with a cloudy belly; Something to cuddle when a tear leaves you feeling so unworthy; Facing the dark alone? Scary; It is better to have a friend; Any burden they’ll help carry keeping secrets so you can mend.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/11/2023 4:06:00 PM

Hello Melani, It is good to cuddle a teddy bear when feeling sadden. It is good to hold a teddy bear when the tears flow. It soothes the pain. Holing onto the teddy bear gives comfort when you need something to hold onto. Enjoy your evening muy friend./Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2023 11:00:00 AM

Hello Melani, I will . I enjoyed your poem. Hugs. /Darlene/

Melani Udaeta
Date: 12/11/2023 8:08:00 PM

True. Hold on to yours. Blessings

Karen Croft

Date: 12/11/2023 1:16:00 AM

True. Everyone needs someone or something to lean on in time of need

Melani Udaeta
Date: 12/11/2023 8:08:00 PM

Thank you! Yes that’s true.