Something Precious Was Lost

Something so precious was lost
Where to look, where to start
Oh God, what could I have done
To lose the beat of my heart

Over a year now it was stolen
So coldy ripped from my chest
The moment my child was taken
My only son laid to rest

Nothing I do will replace you
No more chances to show you I care
Our home now holds only memories
Where once it held the love we’d share

I thought that time would dull this pain
But tears of agony still fall each day
A slow warm stream of salty flow
For you were stolen away

Your room is now my sanctuary
Your grave my place of healing
In love’s casket your last journey
In darkness no more hope or feeling

I go every day to your resting place
Underneath the tree where you lie
In reverance I kneel beside you
And say these words as I cry

I will love you, son, forever
I know your life has started anew
But why did you have to leave me
When I hadn’t stopped loving you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/28/2017 8:33:00 PM
Who did it and why? Did justice run its course?
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Wade Greenlee
Date: 4/29/2018 4:09:00 AM
One of his best friends from high school was being "stalked" by her ex-boyfriend and she called him to come over. He went over and talked to the guy. They went into her house and the ex went to his car and got a gun. He then went into the house and shot my son and then shot himself. I guess justice ran it's course, but I would rather let every person free from jail if I could get back my son. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and helping me share my son with you a little. Peace and love to you, Hannah. We could all use more of both of those.
Date: 3/8/2017 1:49:00 AM
Beautiful words have flown straight from your heart!! In a quandary as I don't know if I should give kudos to your words or condolences for the loss!!! Would love to read more of your work as that is a way to lighten the burden of the heart!! God speed!!
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Wade Greenlee
Date: 3/10/2017 12:26:00 AM
A little bit of both, perhaps. My son was murdered and I have turned to poetry to try and heal. He would be absolutely amazed since he was always the wordsmith. I have written many poems in the last couple of years, and have submitted some raps by my son, as well. You can search for me, I think. Thank you again for your kind and thoughtful words. They do make a difference.
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