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WE RAISE THEM UP
Today we sing 
great joy we bring
To those sweet souls 
words long forgotten

For just a while we take them 
to a peaceful magical place
          a place they knew 
                 a place they loved 
                       a place to put smiles on their face

Even those who do not speak whose memories faded long ago
They’ll sing along inside their heads the words they used to know
And as the music starts to play deep inside a memory stirs
As slowly they will rock and hum before the words begin to come
And by the time we reach page two they sing along with me and you
  
   ‘Blue Moon’  ~  we sing ~ oh how they swoon
   ‘Delilah’ ~ ‘Lean on Me’
   ‘Sweet Caroline' ~ they start to move it really gets them in the groove 
    
We sing with gusto they smile with joy
As memories return when girl meets boy    
Our last rendition our final song
Full of joie de vivre the choir and me

We start to sing ‘You Raise Me Up’
I start to cry ~ I don’t know why it always makes me cry…
We raise the roof our souls entwine they almost touch the sky
Our spirits smile with exultation to cheers ~ applause ~ a celebration

For today we really made their day and they have made ours too
Monies sent to Parkinson’s UK we pray a cure is found one day

We bid them farewell ~ We wave them goodbye
I'm so blessed to be part of this choir
It is food for my heart each time I take part
With lovely friends who like me have “P”     
             
Singing together in our Parkinson’s choir    
I feel truly alive ~ I feel almost on fire…

Written 12th February 2020

I wrote this today after a performance by our Parkinson’s Choir, where we entertained some delightful folk who are living out their final days within a care home.  It was truly inspirational…  

Contest SOMETHING OLD SOMETHING NEW
Sponsor John Lawless

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Date: 10/3/2021 12:49:00 AM
Good to participate Ann,uplifting in many ways
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/12/2021 4:07:00 AM
So uplifting Brian, I could not wait to put pen to paper I was so inspired... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/2/2021 1:21:00 AM
A beautiful poem, I heard most of the songs before. Well done.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/12/2021 4:06:00 AM
Many thanks Victor, and thanks for your continued support my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/1/2021 7:27:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Ann, congratulations on the honor..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/12/2021 4:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, it truly was an honour to see how our songs really did make a difference... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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