Something Old Something New
Original: Haiku
Mountains
mountains so high
looks mysterious in the night
lies a deepest secret
Updated poem
Mountains So High
Bluish shadows in the night,
Majestically proud in sight,
God’s great creation,
He’s tender loving affection.
As tall as the sky,
Feels like climbing, want to try?
Its peak looks mysteriously,
Pyramid shape stands perfectly.
Lies a deepest secret,
Imagining at the top of the cliff,
Snowy Alps show its whiteness,
Nature surrounded with happiness.
October 24, 2021
For John Lawless contest
Copyright © Bukang Liwayway | Year Posted 2021
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