Something New

Doing something new that itself is a test
Using my brain guess that would be best
First I must track it, think it's incognito
Hiding from that annoying mosquito

The buzz in my head is tinnitus they say
More like a mossie whose lost its way 
Can feel the wheels of thinking turning
of sun and an ice cream i am yearning 

Why do I get it on my nose
Cos I am a messy girl I suppose
Hey this is a first, am using rhyme
Brain your doing ok this time

Will take it easy now don't want  to be stressed
Cos it's with only one brain cell I've been blessed
I close my eyes thinking may try this again
Now shall I travel by bus or train

Oh my! my brain has ceased up, has gone I fear
Thinks that's enough usage.....wiping away a tear

Contest :Trying something new by Nina Parmenter

Penned 25 October 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcconnell Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Nice one Seren, good rhyme and flow too. I liked this one.
Roberts Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 2:50 PM
the word they have **** out was queer why for goodness sake
Roberts Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 2:55 PM
I have altered it now to I fear...lol
Tacito Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Hey, hey!!!! I haven't seen something new from in you in ages! How cool is this! I can relate wholly to this piece as I go through similar challenges about 4...7 times a day. :) Keep this up!
Roberts Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Hi Drake thanks for commenting I have written a few lately. lol
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