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The ballerina with her coquetry and prince with yawning tights his legs stump me. Her twirl a-spin with graceful poise so long. The twaddle of his movements poor ping-pong. Unhandsome chin and rabbit ears so dull But Alice charms before the queen of bull. Her ruffles white, she curtsies with a kiss the redness of a playing card’s abyss. A timed waste for the prince - he scorns his watch. His buffoonish pants made of trips and starch. The queen, she’s not amused — “Off with their heads!” “I shall have rabbit stew and corset seeds” The ballerina begs with lashes long The queen so flatly states her wish “S’long!” Just then a storm reshuffles deck - a win. The queen’s been tossed - the duo rides their Schwinn. To find a finer ballet stage just in The precise time for girls and rabbit-spin. 10/22/2018 Try Something New Poetry Contest Sponsor - Nina Parmenter With dodgy rhymes

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Date: 10/22/2018 3:12:00 PM
Great twist to this classic tale! :) gw (soupmail)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! <3 Kim
Date: 10/22/2018 1:47:00 PM
So - is this really about a deck of playing cards? Anyway, very fun with a sly ironic 'wink' - should do well in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you! I say wherever your mind goes with it! <3 Kim
Date: 10/22/2018 12:41:00 PM
A well written twist to the Alice story. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 1:00:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 10/22/2018 10:12:00 AM
Delightfully dodgy! Good luck in he contest :) xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 12:07:00 PM
Thanks! LOL

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