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Something More

Something more is pulling at my soul. offering me more of what the Lord has in-store. more than money or love can even buy. everything around me but unable to call it “mine“. telling me over and over again- hurry and pick yourself up from the state that you’re in. interceding for others time after time. new things to touch- girl you’re next in line. Miles and miles of toiling on this path below. obeying all the rules and reaching out for more. everyday is brighter for the Lord is in control.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/5/2009 8:36:00 AM

Clever work! My poetry teacher(Anna Rabinowitz) wrote a book length acrostic(Darkling). Thanks for your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/16/2009 4:27:00 PM

the promise is a promise that will be kept. sometimes we wish on this side of the fence but this is the devils world and these things are temporal. but the reward we have up there is incorruptable and theives cannot break through and steal. it is something much more than you can imagin. john h loving iii

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/2/2009 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful acrostic Mary. May all your prayers be answered sweet friend. A warm thank you for your congrats. So very kind of you and much appreciated. Love, Shar

Date: 6/1/2009 11:41:00 AM

Amen! Nice use of the challenging acrostic form for an inspirational message. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Thank you for the kind words on my poem. Karen

Jessica K

Date: 5/30/2009 8:34:00 PM

Nice write Mary, quite beautiful...I loved it -Jessica

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2009 5:59:00 PM

Guess we all feel that we spend a lot of time "interceding for others," but I think God likes us to help when we can. Still, I can appreciate the desire to discover more of His wonders. Very wise bit of introspection, Mary. Nice write! Love, Carolyn