Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Something Iffy

My neighbour has a shed
And he's in there all the time,
There are lots of bangs and crashes,
"He's up to something iffy," I opined.

My wife said "mind your business
It's his shed, it's up to him,"
(still though I'd love to know,
What on earth he hides within.) 

So I asked him, and he told me
He'd built a memory machine,
It helps you remember or forget,
I said " show me what you mean."

My neighbour has a shed....

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Swetha Vangaveti August 21, 2019 at 9:40 PM I wish i would see that machine. Take me with you to his shed Gary!!! Gary Smith August 22, 2019 at 7:20 AM Lol, thank you Swetha. :)

Heidi Sands August 20, 2019 at 2:46 PM I enjoyed this. Good one :) Gary Smith August 20, 2019 at 3:10 PM Thank you Heidi. :)

Chris Green August 20, 2019 at 12:51 PM That was really funny and creative. Gary Smith August 20, 2019 at 1:31 PM Thank you Chris, great to have you back. :)

Gershon Wolf August 20, 2019 at 12:08 PM Hilarious, Gary. Such an imaginative write --- and what a killer ending. Love it. :) gw Gershon Wolf August 23, 2019 at 1:57 PM I can just picture it. Nice to have fun at this once in a while... Gary Smith August 20, 2019 at 1:32 PM Thank you Gershon, I was giggling as I wrote it lol, :)