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Something I Can Touch

I don't always get your literal direction ~ though worth reflection

your margins may be quite narrow ~ but you always shoot a straight arrow

searching for something tangible to feel ~ may not lead to a reveal

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2024

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Duke Beaufort Date: 2/24/2024 5:01:00 PM Lin, this could apply to a lot of work that we all try to decipher. At least we're trying and not getting too upset if we're missing a point. It might not be our fault exactly. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 3/7/2024 7:21:00 AM Yes, it could, Duke. Forgive my late response.

Jan Allison Date: 2/23/2024 9:33:00 AM thought provoking lines Lin, hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 2/23/2024 10:05:00 AM Ha Jan Allison Date: 2/23/2024 9:50:00 AM its weird there was a song playing on the radio called 'Poison Arrow by ABC' and we know some words can be barbed! hugs Jan xx Lin Lane Date: 2/23/2024 9:45:00 AM Thanks, Jan. It's kind of a conglomeration of thoughts... mine and David's. Just a fun thing.

David Kavanagh Date: 2/23/2024 9:00:00 AM I’m only seeing this one now Lin and it rings a bell with our comments on my narrow margins post, I’m glad you said (may not) rather than (definitely won’t), I do like tangible evidence, but am also open to abstract persuasion, your second monoku is right on the mark, cheers David Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 2/23/2024 5:57:00 PM None of those are just right for you. I know your face, so no mask. lol You don't need a disguise, just bring your quiver. David Kavanagh Date: 2/23/2024 10:21:00 AM Perhaps I should get a Robin Hood Avatar, nah he’s too clean cut for me, Captain Ahab with a harpoon hmmm! That could work lol! Lin Lane Date: 2/23/2024 9:44:00 AM Hi David, I'm glad you found it. It's all based on your 'Narrow Margins.' Everyone is entitled to an opinion. Opinions change and even if they don't, who's to say one is right and the other wrong? I was addressing you directly, Straight Arrow. Just don't expect me to get you a mask and a costume... although that would be pretty cool.