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Something Further Must Be Said - Triolet

Something further must be said. 
Still, no more shall e'er be spoken
from dispassion's distant bed. 

Something further must be said,
but undertaken by the dead,
vows of silence can't be broken. 

Something further must be said,
still, no more shall e'er be spoken...


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July 18, 2015

Copyright © Lycia Harding | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/27/2015 10:07:00 PM Lycia, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/28/2015 10:05:00 AM Thank you, PD! xoxo

Kp Nunez Date: 7/26/2015 6:54:00 AM Interesting pensive write. Really good one. Congratulations, Lycia! Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/26/2015 9:05:00 PM Thank you, Kim - I see you're still dominating the lists in fine form, as usual. Keep it up! xoxoxo

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/24/2015 7:47:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/24/2015 8:33:00 PM Thank you, Debbie! xoxo

Skat A Date: 7/24/2015 4:34:00 PM Lycia, nice win. SK Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/24/2015 5:19:00 PM Thank you, SKAT! xoxo

Eve Roper Date: 7/24/2015 4:32:00 PM Congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/24/2015 5:18:00 PM Thank you, Eve! xoxo

Jan Allison Date: 7/24/2015 1:12:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Lycia:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/24/2015 5:17:00 PM Thank you, Jan! xoxo

Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 10:33:00 AM most enjoyable poem Lycia and welcome to soup. congrats on placing hugs Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/24/2015 11:35:00 AM Thank you, Shadow. You guys at the Soup have really impressed me with your wonderful writing and excellent support. Keep up the good work! xoxo

Skat A Date: 7/19/2015 4:47:00 PM enjoyed your triolet Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/19/2015 7:37:00 PM Thank you, SKAT. What I'm trying to say is that sometimes people are so hurt by events, they become deadened and may detach to the degree that even a chance at resolution/reconciliation can't bring them back. Lycia Harding Date: 7/19/2015 7:37:00 PM But I'm having trouble with the punctuation! I just edited it so if you come back to this convo, please read it again and give me your input, (if you have any) okay?

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/18/2015 10:08:00 PM this is a bit different from most triolets, but I see the pattern of the repeating lines and I really like it! Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/18/2015 10:47:00 PM I think that's right, isn't it? Now I'm even getting confused... Lycia Harding Date: 7/18/2015 10:44:00 PM Hi Dre. I just messed around with the format, it's technical form is as follows: ----------------- Nothing further can be said. No more shall now be spoken ----------------- from dispassion's distant bed. Nothing further can be said, ----------------- as such deals are, by the dead, struck mute. So even broken, ----------------- nothing further can be said. No more shall now be spoken.

Jill Spagnola Date: 7/18/2015 7:13:00 PM This is an awesome vehicle of growth :), jill Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/18/2015 8:23:00 PM Thank you, Jill. What an intriguing comment... xoxo!

Jan Allison Date: 7/18/2015 5:52:00 PM a deep and sad triolet Lycia:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Lycia Harding Date: 7/18/2015 8:44:00 PM Jan, will you please check this poem again and see if the different format reads better? Lycia Harding Date: 7/18/2015 8:29:00 PM I'm not satisfied with the punctuation/line format. I'm going to change it... Lycia Harding Date: 7/18/2015 8:21:00 PM Thanks, my Dear. It's about denial and despondency and shock. Can you read that in it?