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Night thoughts

A serene succumbing through windows pane In morning solitudes of the secreting scarlet sun Where love penetrates partitions of the past Riding on the refulgent rays of luculent light ~~~ Orbs of passion permeate the twilight realm As they tease & scintillate the nocturnal night Lustrous luminants that toy with our lament In the end, giving in to our deserving desire ~~~ Love, what have thou brought me…unaware? For I am a slave to your thespian thoughts A mere mortal capable of salving seductive sin The carnivorous consciousness encroaches still ~~~ Within paleolithic promiscuous planes of plight A vixen Vesuvius volcano erotically erupts I am engulfed by the luscious lingering lava Now petrified, entombed by love’s Majesty. Feb.01.2019 "Something Bigger Than Myself" Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Date: 3/5/2019 12:55:00 PM
Hello Winged Warrior, Love this poem.I had a feeling f being there. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/2/2019 8:31:00 PM
Orbs of Passion Lovely Words
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Date: 2/25/2019 10:00:00 PM
Wow WW back with a vengeance I see, congrats on a great 2nd place win! As always amazing alliteration.
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Date: 2/17/2019 8:51:00 AM
A very deep soulful write W.W .Well penned. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/9/2019 7:59:00 PM
Love can be all encompassing, but does not need a pedestal. I like the way you handled this one. Regards David PS I am now semi retired and battling cancer of the treatable kind so feel still on winning side. Regards David.
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Date: 2/8/2019 7:35:00 PM
Love and Light!! Very powerful indeed. As always, your words take flight. This is so beautiful my dear friend. Congratulations on this win. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/8/2019 7:17:00 AM
A feast of poetic grandeur my friend, WW!
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Date: 2/7/2019 12:44:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, WW, with this impressive take on the challenge.
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Date: 2/4/2019 11:38:00 AM
Haven't been around much but I have not forgotten you. As usual your alliteration is superb. Hope you're well. I'm not much really. Getting too old.
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Date: 2/4/2019 8:02:00 AM
This was just too beautiful to not be "fav'd"; almost musical in an ethereal sort of way. There's a magic to it when read out loud. Wonderful.
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Date: 2/3/2019 1:16:00 PM
Hi WW, Your use of "Alliteration" is surperb. Great take on the contest theme. I found it to be so poetic. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:38:00 AM
Great alliteration WW..
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Date: 2/2/2019 7:59:00 PM
Wonderful write my dear brother! Beautiful in every way!;) Hugs Dragon Fire
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:14:00 AM
A mere mortal after all...thought provoking one...
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:22:00 AM
Your use of alliteration is excellent, it's easily discernible but not overdone; the whole piece is laced with an oddly mournful sensuality. Great write, W's.
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Date: 2/1/2019 1:59:00 PM
- Lovely poetic writing W.W. ...and you're right ... love is great ... bigger than we think :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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