Something Bigger Than Myself

She was staring at me but i was staring through her,
Her eyes full of beauty,but her soul in tears,
Though she smiled,i could see the grief deep in her,
She tried to hide it but i could feel the tussle within her,
As i asked her what her troubles were,anxiety overwhelmed her,
As tears rolled down her pulpy smooth cheeks,everything seemed quiet,
At that moment i couldn't think of anything to console her,

And as i stared at her with sympathy,she tried to murmur out something,
It was too much for her,i had to hold her in my arms
And with tears in my soul i murmured,
I may not be able to whisk you from this hell,but allow me to walk you through it.

~the_lamp

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/27/2024 6:58:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/8/2019 9:37:00 AM
Hello Brian.It is a very interesting case.Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 3/7/2019 11:15:00 AM
Hello Brian Ndung'u, so nice to meet you. All I can say is Wow! Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:01:00 AM
Spectacularly done!
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Date: 2/25/2019 1:27:00 PM
Loved it.
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Date: 2/23/2019 1:54:00 AM
Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading!
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Date: 2/16/2019 11:29:00 AM
A beautiful way to love.
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:32:00 PM
AWESOME
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:07:00 AM
Awesome
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:21:00 PM
Its a wow and a yes for me. I big piece it is
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Date: 1/31/2019 10:45:00 AM
Awesome
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