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SOMETHING BIGGER THAN MYSELF

She was staring at me but i was staring through her, Her eyes full of beauty,but her soul in tears, Though she smiled,i could see the grief deep in her, She tried to hide it but i could feel the tussle within her, As i asked her what her troubles were,anxiety overwhelmed her, As tears rolled down her pulpy smooth cheeks,everything seemed quiet, At that moment i couldn't think of anything to console her, And as i stared at her with sympathy,she tried to murmur out something, It was too much for her,i had to hold her in my arms And with tears in my soul i murmured, I may not be able to whisk you from this hell,but allow me to walk you through it. ~the_lamp

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Date: 3/8/2019 9:37:00 AM
Hello Brian.It is a very interesting case.Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 3/7/2019 11:15:00 AM
Hello Brian Ndung'u, so nice to meet you. All I can say is Wow! Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/3/2019 7:01:00 AM
Spectacularly done!
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Date: 2/25/2019 1:27:00 PM
Loved it.
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Date: 2/23/2019 1:54:00 AM
Nicely done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading!
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Date: 2/16/2019 11:29:00 AM
A beautiful way to love.
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:32:00 PM
AWESOME
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:07:00 AM
Awesome
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:21:00 PM
Its a wow and a yes for me. I big piece it is
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Date: 1/31/2019 10:45:00 AM
Awesome
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