Someplace Exotic

Take me someplace exotic Someplace completely quixotic Build castles in clouds Away from the crowds And live cuz I am neurotic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 7, 2017 at 1:31 AM
Haha, I DO have tics, lots of them actually! What a cool limerick this is, can I join?
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July 7, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thanks, Darren, and yes you can join in. Soupmail me and I'll post it with your name underneath.
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July 6, 2017 at 4:34 PM
Count me in...I need a vacation from myself. This was really cool Dale and who else but you would have tried a poem with all of those "tic" rhymes. Really nice.
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July 6, 2017 at 4:41 PM
I know, huh? And I don't even have a tic! But come along; in a neurotic world there's can't be any charge for the tickets!
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July 6, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Good one, Dale! Janice
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July 6, 2017 at 4:41 PM
Thanks, Janice.
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July 6, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Sounds like paradise! Fun one;-) ~ john
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July 6, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thanks, John!
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