Someone To Care

mossy vines served as camourflage
on a decaying  gravestone, in old graveyard,
time not revealed the names on that stone,
was this the one for which I had been searching hard.

been looking back in history at my family tree
some I have found, was a pleasure to see
names of old folks that imaged me,
I am what I am, because of history.

this one dirty and unkempt, hidden away, seemed no one cared,
two names are gouged out of the stone
as though their life they hadn’t shared.....yet
someone had cared when their life was done.

what crime had they committed to be left alone,
had they gone against family rights and wrongs
looking up the names in history, it is shown
falling in love, to each other belonged

a hindu and a muslim so much in love
they married yet had to hide this fact,
shamed, their family no longer proud of,
died together in a suicidal act.

no one to care for their blessed names
on this gravestone, covered in vine,
who are the guilty ones who bares this blame,
caring in future for this plot, will be mine.

Contest : camourflage me a poem

Theme used :mossy vines served as camourflage
                    on a decaying  gravestone, in old graveyard,


This poem to be entered in Take the dagger from my heart, please Contest


penned  4 August 2016
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someone to care  	N/A 	
Contest Camouflage Me A Poem 
Finalized 8/10/2016 12:00:00 AM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/31/2016 7:51:00 PM
Amazing Poem, Seren!! Such great imagery along this story line. Vivid honesty, and imagery were greatly displayed. Enjoyable piece overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/1/2016 8:54:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed unfortunately wasn't included in winners list....i am p!eased that it was enjoyed by so many.....Seren
Date: 8/5/2016 11:17:00 PM
Beautiful story, I read yesterday, but wasn't at my computer!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/7/2016 12:48:00 AM
Thx my friend.... Seren
Date: 8/4/2016 11:39:00 AM
Wow Seren a tremendous write...hey do you have a time machine?...I see this was written tomorrow...can you get me today's lottery numbers? : ))
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/4/2016 1:21:00 PM
If it wasn't on my computer I wouldn't know either...lol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/4/2016 1:13:00 PM
Trust you to notice I don't know the date. Lol thanks for stopping by....Seren
Date: 8/4/2016 8:20:00 AM
oh Seren this is heartbreaking to think despite their love the different religions drove them to to exile and suicide - have sadly heard of this happening in real life:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/4/2016 8:50:00 AM
thanks Jan was the possible killing of that young girl posted as missing by her husband, inspired me to write....Seren
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