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Someone Said If wishes were horses beggars would ride. You told me this when I was a child in Need of some want. A desire never shared with a Friend I’m not sure what you meant. Your meaning went Sailing with the horse riding beggars. Right now I feel as though I’m riding Behind them. Like a lost child trapped in A grown-up body, unsure of what Bridge was crossed or Over what Troubled past the Water raged. I cannot relinquish my fear, Will my past to be different, Ease the confusion of the scars Your words left on my Mind. John G. Lawless 2/27/2014 //written for a “word acrostic” poem contest, Poetrysoup//

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Date: 3/10/2014 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations...a well deserved win...a different approach...well done.
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Date: 3/10/2014 3:35:00 PM
Nice dear...Best wishes from India...Truly your words reached on my mind....
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:59:00 AM
John that's brilliant! Congrats on great win !!
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:55:00 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:45:00 AM
John congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:24:00 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. John
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Date: 3/10/2014 12:26:00 AM
Well written, John. Grats!
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:19:00 PM
Great poem John - I don't think I've seen an acrostic flow as seamless as this
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on the win John. A very intriguing take on the acrostic style. Peace. :)
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:52:00 PM
Good point about how confusing communication can be, I had nightmares about the snakes on the snake curves, lol, enjoyed your poem John, congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:25:00 PM
I had thought that all of these poems would surely sound alike. But I was wrong. This is outstanding and a great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2014 6:45:00 PM
Joyce, I have been encouraging people to "blow up the box factory" and write from the heart for years. It leads to unexpected results. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Date: 3/9/2014 6:14:00 PM
Terrific theme !! Congratulations on your winning poem!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2014 6:40:00 PM
Carrie, thank you for reading and checking in with a comment, always appreciated.
Date: 3/9/2014 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations, John! Well done!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2014 6:42:00 PM
Roy, thank you for the acknowledgement. Knowing that someone read and appreciated one of my poems is always a nice feeling.
Date: 3/9/2014 5:17:00 PM
CONGRATS on the win, John! A very fine poem, sir!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2014 6:38:00 PM
Michael, thanks for the thumbs up...always appreciated.
Date: 3/6/2014 5:38:00 PM
to change the past, erase the line, write happy words , erase the crime, to dwell on hurt, burnt acid time, with alas alack, i'm doing fine? or am i? methinks we are here to suffer, at different levels, for our souls rhyme??? great poem mate...
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2014 6:37:00 PM
Don, thanks for reading and commenting on this poem. Your poetic reply reveals an insight into the poets passion.
Date: 3/2/2014 10:39:00 AM
i like this poem. the title drew me in and the rest made me think. nice one!
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2014 6:34:00 PM
Ilene, thanks for your kind words. Probably the best compliment a poet can receive is in that short sentence "the title drew me in and the rest made me think."

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