Someone Like You

I heard about an angel,
And I feel the care for you.
I saw your face,
And more I hold on dreams.
I learned to feel you,
And I’m moved inside the flame.
I proposed my love, 
And you answered without questions.

Now you’re with me 
 Breeze of winter of my sea.
I kissed your lips,
And felt the heaven in it.
I felt your heart,
And I want to live in snow.
Now that we’re together,
I wish it never ends.

But the climax stops,
We lost the biggest wish.
The sky turns against me,
I lost the brightest star.
One wish I’m afraid to lost,
But now must face the truth.

I hold on dreams
But it’s all outdated and wrong
You learned to live without me,
I feel the other ways of love.
Sorry, but you’re my breath
You’re just the best I learned.

More years went through and faded,
And the pain gets lost.
But within the passing years,
I know I know I had lost the girl.
Only the best for you,
Luckiest holder of my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/8/2012 6:10:00 AM
Jett, a love long lost and gone but still clinging on to happy memories are the best things our heart can only but do..longing..sad that they have flown away from us but A Happy Love will always be remembered as time pass.. Anna xoxo P.S. ..your writes are very nice to read..
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Date: 11/8/2012 2:33:00 AM
This poem is really cool, the depth of love is amazing
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