Somedays

How diverse my universe Some days a blessing Some days a curse The ups the downs the round and round Some days so boring Some days profound The daily grind can be so unkind Some days we focus Some days we're blind So come days end we break or bend Some days we fall Some days we mend

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Tim Smith

Date: 2/25/2016 1:52:00 PM

Round and round we go lie an endless rollercoaster with all the highs and lows. Throw in the occasional loop d loop for excitement.

Carl Fraser
Date: 2/25/2016 8:07:00 PM

Yes Tim somedays are hectic. Thanks for reading. Blessings Carl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/25/2016 2:35:00 AM

Oh....I've had those days as well, Carl...I've recently fallen, but I've gotten up. :) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

Carl Fraser
Date: 2/25/2016 8:06:00 PM

I'm glad you have the fortitude to get back up Eileen. Thanks for your kind comment. BLESSINGS Carl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 9:51:00 PM

That is life, my friend... What more can I say? I have my good and bad days. One thing never fails me, though. And I bet you know what that is.... LOL... My laziness. :) I can always count on that :) Hugs ~LINDA~

Carl Fraser
Date: 2/24/2016 9:56:00 PM

Thanks Linda, this is something every person can relate to. Lazy or not lol. Blessings to you my friend. Carl

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 2/24/2016 9:48:00 PM

Very nice, creative, and relevant, true. The pace and words fall excellently in place and this poem is truly a gem to read. Great message too.

Carl Fraser
Date: 2/24/2016 9:57:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by Cynthia. I appreciate it. Blessings Carl