Somedays

How diverse my universe
Some days a blessing 
Some days a curse
The ups the downs
 the round and round
Some days so boring 
Some days profound          
The daily grind 
can be so unkind 
Some days we focus
Some days we're blind
So come days end
 we break or bend
Some days we fall 
Some days we mend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Round and round we go lie an endless rollercoaster with all the highs and lows. Throw in the occasional loop d loop for excitement.
Fraser Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Yes Tim somedays are hectic. Thanks for reading. Blessings Carl
Manassian Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Oh....I've had those days as well, Carl...I've recently fallen, but I've gotten up. :) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
Fraser Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 8:06 PM
I'm glad you have the fortitude to get back up Eileen. Thanks for your kind comment. BLESSINGS Carl
A   Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 9:51 PM
That is life, my friend... What more can I say? I have my good and bad days. One thing never fails me, though. And I bet you know what that is.... LOL... My laziness. :) I can always count on that :) Hugs ~LINDA~
Fraser Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thanks Linda, this is something every person can relate to. Lazy or not lol. Blessings to you my friend. Carl
Buhain-Baello Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Very nice, creative, and relevant, true. The pace and words fall excellently in place and this poem is truly a gem to read. Great message too.
Fraser Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 9:57 PM
Thank you for stopping by Cynthia. I appreciate it. Blessings Carl
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