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Barbara Gorelick

Someday It Seems So Futile


Let me tell you what I sometimes think
And why I am so often forced to drink
Most of what I write will be forgotten
'Cuz my rhyme and meter are so rotten

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2014

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April 15, 2014 at 9:06 AM

Thank you for making me laugh, Barbara. I needed that. Yes! I am Okay!!! Writing allows me to release and heal. Thank you for your concern. Elaine

April 14, 2014 at 2:39 AM

Thank you Barbara for your always welcome comments on my endeavours.Best wishes with your poetry.rgds Brian

April 13, 2014 at 7:03 PM

This is wonderful Barbara..You did this one splendidly....Tim

Frederic Parker

April 13, 2014 at 5:33 PM

this must be for fun as I've found your poems a joy to read...as for me I write a lot of metered poems..but I want content more than perfect meter...

Barbara Gorelick

April 13, 2014 at 5:36 PM

Yes, just for run..although there are days..sigh. BG

Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2014 at 5:01 PM

hahaha. Is this for rhyme battle. It's a really fun one. I sure wish you were getting more hits, Barbara, you are one of the best here!!

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