Sara Kendrick Poet Monorhyme

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Someday

Someday death we'll have to weather
Earth no longer will us tether
We will be light as a feather
Rise together, rise together!

Silently in the long dark night
Jesus will call us to His great light
Clothes we won't need for the last flight  
He's our delight, he's our delight  

Help me go with sense of wonder
Let me not put my hope asunder
Assured forgiven are life's blunders
Lowered under, lowered under

My spirit soars to the unknown
Where Christ is seated on His throne
As I look upon his damaged bone
Finally known, finally known

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Judy Ball December 13, 2023 at 12:11 PM Finally Known, It is good to know that someday we will know and understand everything. For many of us Someday will come sooner than others. We should always try to be ready at a moment's notice. A fine write my friend. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB Sara Kendrick December 13, 2023 at 2:37 PM Thank you, Judy. Christmas is almost here. We will have our family gathering this weekend. Sara K

Tonye George December 12, 2023 at 6:44 AM "Finally known." Lovely ryhme, indeed we'll be with him in heaven soon. Sara Kendrick December 12, 2023 at 7:33 AM Tonye, The One Who really knows us will be there and then we will really know ourselves. Thanks for stopping by ..Sara K

Ink Empress December 12, 2023 at 5:49 AM What a soulful write woven with such captivating rhymes. I absolutely love what you’ve expressed here. You faith and light in your soul emanates through this poem. Sending you back light always. Stay blessed dear sara Sara Kendrick December 12, 2023 at 7:32 AM I hope that you have blessings of Christmas delivered to your door and no Grinch is there to steal them, I E. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Panagiota Romios December 11, 2023 at 10:51 AM The older I get, the less I fear. Earth feels very frightning to me. I think your use of repetition in each stanze is beautifully unique, thank you. Merci, Pangie Sara Kendrick December 11, 2023 at 2:23 PM Thank you, Panagiota. Yes, there is a lot on earth that is dangerous including other people. I appreciate your uplifting review of my work. Sara K

Karen Croft December 10, 2023 at 11:49 PM Beautiful poem. I also do think about death sometimes and wonder how beautiful and peaceful it will be. Sara Kendrick December 11, 2023 at 5:06 AM Karen, thank you for your kind review of my work. We just don't know how and when death will come which is the part that is of most concern. Sara K

Silent One December 10, 2023 at 12:23 PM Awesome rhymes Sara.. yes we will have to face death one day... this is one about your faith, but I am sure everyone thinks about death and how it will effect them.. nice flow to this one. Sara Kendrick December 10, 2023 at 4:21 PM Thank you, SO. Yes, everyone thinks about death even if it is only in time of a crisis in their life, but we all face something at sometime. Thanks for the nice flow and awesome rhymes. Made my day. Sara K

Valsa George December 10, 2023 at 8:21 AM Yes, this earth will not for ever 'tether us'. We have to surrender to the call of Death. But the thought that it is not the end but the beginning of a life eternal gives us the strength to face death. Your faith shines in every line.... dear Sara. Love this so much. Sara Kendrick December 10, 2023 at 8:40 AM I appreciate the fact that you seem to be a believer, Valsa. If we don't meet in person here upon this earth, we should meet in heaven. Thanks for the visits. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula December 10, 2023 at 7:29 AM I enjoy reading these Monotetra forms you ressurected. I've not seen much of it until now. Peak interest assured, Amen, Sara. Aloha, William Sara Kendrick December 10, 2023 at 8:38 AM Thank you, William. I hope you will try a few. I don't know how I learned about them but I think they are worthy of a try. Sara K

Hiya Sharma December 10, 2023 at 5:05 AM Oh my, yes.. Death begins a renewed journey and one, that actually fulfills every hope of being blessed with His divine light.. Our spirits finally become known and all the secrets soar in the skies of truth.. Such a deeply philosophical poem, enriched with resonating emotions and wonderfully crafted words. I loveee this so much, sending you light, always :) Sara Kendrick December 10, 2023 at 5:58 AM I am glad you liked this one, Hiya. I appreciate the smiley face. Yes, we will know as we are known. Sara K

Tom Cunningham December 9, 2023 at 10:50 PM I never see death as the end but the start of our new life in God's Kingdom. Hope you're having a lovely weekend Sara. Tom Sara Kendrick December 10, 2023 at 5:57 AM Tom, So far so good. The tornado threat has past, and we will have a cool down with winds coming in. Thank you for dropping by and the nice review. Sara K