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Someday death we'll have to weather Earth no longer will us tether We will be light as a feather Rise together, rise together! Silently in the long dark night Jesus will call us to His great light Clothes we won't need for the last flight He's our delight, he's our delight Help me go with sense of wonder Let me not put my hope asunder Assured forgiven are life's blunders Lowered under, lowered under My spirit soars to the unknown Where Christ is seated on His throne As I look upon his damaged bone Finally known, finally known

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Date: 12/13/2023 12:11:00 PM
Finally Known, It is good to know that someday we will know and understand everything. For many of us Someday will come sooner than others. We should always try to be ready at a moment's notice. A fine write my friend. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2023 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. Christmas is almost here. We will have our family gathering this weekend. Sara K
Date: 12/12/2023 6:44:00 AM
"Finally known." Lovely ryhme, indeed we'll be with him in heaven soon.
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Date: 12/12/2023 7:33:00 AM
Tonye, The One Who really knows us will be there and then we will really know ourselves. Thanks for stopping by ..Sara K
Date: 12/12/2023 5:49:00 AM
What a soulful write woven with such captivating rhymes. I absolutely love what you’ve expressed here. You faith and light in your soul emanates through this poem. Sending you back light always. Stay blessed dear sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2023 7:32:00 AM
I hope that you have blessings of Christmas delivered to your door and no Grinch is there to steal them, I E. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K
Date: 12/11/2023 10:51:00 AM
The older I get, the less I fear. Earth feels very frightning to me. I think your use of repetition in each stanze is beautifully unique, thank you. Merci, Pangie
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2023 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. Yes, there is a lot on earth that is dangerous including other people. I appreciate your uplifting review of my work. Sara K
Date: 12/10/2023 11:49:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I also do think about death sometimes and wonder how beautiful and peaceful it will be.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2023 5:06:00 AM
Karen, thank you for your kind review of my work. We just don't know how and when death will come which is the part that is of most concern. Sara K
Date: 12/10/2023 12:23:00 PM
Awesome rhymes Sara.. yes we will have to face death one day... this is one about your faith, but I am sure everyone thinks about death and how it will effect them.. nice flow to this one.
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Date: 12/10/2023 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, SO. Yes, everyone thinks about death even if it is only in time of a crisis in their life, but we all face something at sometime. Thanks for the nice flow and awesome rhymes. Made my day. Sara K
Date: 12/10/2023 8:21:00 AM
Yes, this earth will not for ever 'tether us'. We have to surrender to the call of Death. But the thought that it is not the end but the beginning of a life eternal gives us the strength to face death. Your faith shines in every line.... dear Sara. Love this so much.
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Date: 12/10/2023 8:40:00 AM
I appreciate the fact that you seem to be a believer, Valsa. If we don't meet in person here upon this earth, we should meet in heaven. Thanks for the visits. Sara K
Date: 12/10/2023 7:29:00 AM
I enjoy reading these Monotetra forms you ressurected. I've not seen much of it until now. Peak interest assured, Amen, Sara. Aloha, William
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, William. I hope you will try a few. I don't know how I learned about them but I think they are worthy of a try. Sara K
Date: 12/10/2023 5:05:00 AM
Oh my, yes.. Death begins a renewed journey and one, that actually fulfills every hope of being blessed with His divine light.. Our spirits finally become known and all the secrets soar in the skies of truth.. Such a deeply philosophical poem, enriched with resonating emotions and wonderfully crafted words. I loveee this so much, sending you light, always :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 5:58:00 AM
I am glad you liked this one, Hiya. I appreciate the smiley face. Yes, we will know as we are known. Sara K
Date: 12/9/2023 10:50:00 PM
I never see death as the end but the start of our new life in God's Kingdom. Hope you're having a lovely weekend Sara. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 5:57:00 AM
Tom, So far so good. The tornado threat has past, and we will have a cool down with winds coming in. Thank you for dropping by and the nice review. Sara K
Date: 12/9/2023 3:21:00 PM
Reverent poetry Sara. As for me, my hope lies here - Matthew 5:5
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 3:29:00 AM
Don't know if I would qualify as meek, Tom. I depend on what Jesus did for me and only on that. Thanks for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

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