Somebody Else

A lush
A hot tomato
Full of bourbon
Holding up a bar stool
Cigarette between her fingers
Manicured nails meant to kill
And I’m on a bender
And hell bent
Smoky crushed velvet
James Bond would be so proud
A jazz quartet is swinging 
To a heroin crowd
Sunglasses in the night
The brother is so cool
A nicotine queen
Is filing in between
Bartender named Lloyd
Says my money’s no good 
Drinks are on the house
They know I’ll pay in cocaine
When we slide on out the back
“What was that?” she says
“A double Jack straight up?”
No mixers for me
I’m drinking for the buzz
It takes a lot of booze to kill 
The memories of you 
And pretend I’m someone else.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Spase Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 7:22 PM
Nice flavorful poem. Imagine how distructive people are when they are attracted to wrong type of people in wrong environments.
Kilmer Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 6:58 PM
Jennifer, thank you for you comment. I appreciate you reading my work. ~Kilmer
Hood Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 7:43 PM
The last three lines are poignant for me, it's like you wrote what I feel... love this
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October 18, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Thanks Rachael. I am happy and sad at the same time. I hope that your life is better is better for I know that being someone else is no fun. ~Kilmer
Franks Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:34 PM
This is the scene I saw at the "Sardine Can" in Vallejo!
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October 18, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Bingo! I witnessed it in Finland. ~Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Superb imagery and content. Captivated all the way through. Awesome.
Kithinji Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Onetime Kalakuta Republic! Lagos.
Kilmer Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Really! Interesting. Thanks Gerald...I think! :)
Mehta Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:05 AM
Nice character sketch with similies, Stephen
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September 24, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Thanks Dr. Mehta. You are a true scholar and gentleman. ~ Kilmer
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