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Some Warmth Kept Aside

After a quick rain washing away the dust from the stone laden path Walking down the criss cross ways of the park - we used to visit; Walking... down memory lane - a gust of wind made some water drop on me And some Jasmine flower over my head - my eyes got closed in reflection; You came in - with the magical fragrance of Jasmine and with the gust I can feel the warmth of your hand over my closed eyes As you used to hug me from behind to give me surprises After long...long time, feeling your embrace - surrounding my heart in this afternoon (C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby) For contest : Sense of Touch 30/08/15

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/7/2015 12:01:00 AM

How lovely Anindya.. congrats on fine win!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 12/30/2015 11:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot Dr. Sharma. Warm regards, Bobby

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 5:24:00 PM

Aniyndya <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 12/30/2015 11:49:00 AM

Thanks a lot SKAT A for your wonderful comments. I agree with you thoroughly... but due to time constraints I could not do the same...Still I'll try my level best... hugs, Bobby

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2015 7:29:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I like the feel and mood of this piece.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2015 7:27:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I like the feel and mood of this piece.

Carl Fraser

Date: 9/5/2015 12:07:00 AM

You make us feel the live you share Bobby. Nicely done. Carl

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/6/2015 12:18:00 AM

Thanks a lot Carl for reading and commenting so nicely on my humble write... When a poem touches the chord of a readers heart, the purpose is served... Feeling humbled to know that it has touched so many beautiful hearts... Warm regards, Bobby

Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2015 3:50:00 PM

Bobby, so beautifully penned, full of deep love and thanks for visiting my poem, tangerine sky ~~

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/3/2015 11:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Broken Wings... humbled to know that a poet of your calibre liked it... You people are amazing here... Much love, Bobby

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/1/2015 5:51:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Great contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/2/2015 7:39:00 AM

Delighted to know that my humble write has rendered some enjoyment to a great poet... Thanks and warm regards, Bobby

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2015 6:19:00 PM

very nice!! I have to tell you something. You can't use the actual word "touch" in side the poem, so hurry and take that part out and Nette might give you a win because this is lovely!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/2/2015 2:06:00 AM

Thanks a lot Andrea, for your wonderful comment and important advice. Editing it accordingly... Warm regards, Bobby