Some Warmth Kept Aside


After a quick rain washing away the dust from the stone laden path
Walking down the criss cross ways of the park - we used to visit;
Walking... down memory lane - a gust of wind made some water drop on me
And some Jasmine flower over my head - my eyes got closed in reflection;
You came in - with the magical fragrance of Jasmine and with the gust
I can feel the warmth of your hand over my closed eyes
As you used to hug me from behind to give me surprises
After long...long time, feeling your embrace - surrounding my heart in this afternoon


(C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)


 For contest : Sense of Touch
30/08/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:01 AM
How lovely Anindya.. congrats on fine win!
Tagore Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Thanks a lot Dr. Sharma. Warm regards, Bobby
A  Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Aniyndya <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
Tagore Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Thanks a lot SKAT A for your wonderful comments. I agree with you thoroughly... but due to time constraints I could not do the same...Still I'll try my level best... hugs, Bobby
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Hi Bobby, I like the feel and mood of this piece.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:27 AM
Hi Bobby, I like the feel and mood of this piece.
Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:07 AM
You make us feel the live you share Bobby. Nicely done. Carl
Tagore Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Thanks a lot Carl for reading and commenting so nicely on my humble write... When a poem touches the chord of a readers heart, the purpose is served... Feeling humbled to know that it has touched so many beautiful hearts... Warm regards, Bobby
La France Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 3:50 PM
Bobby, so beautifully penned, full of deep love and thanks for visiting my poem, tangerine sky ~~
Tagore Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:05 PM
Thank you so much Broken Wings... humbled to know that a poet of your calibre liked it... You people are amazing here... Much love, Bobby
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Great contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Tagore Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Delighted to know that my humble write has rendered some enjoyment to a great poet... Thanks and warm regards, Bobby
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 6:19 PM
very nice!! I have to tell you something. You can't use the actual word "touch" in side the poem, so hurry and take that part out and Nette might give you a win because this is lovely!
Tagore Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 2:06 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea, for your wonderful comment and important advice. Editing it accordingly... Warm regards, Bobby
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