Some Thing Is Missing...... Short Version
expression I can not control,
no mother who told
a son lost in dark,
actions she once marked,
longing to be there,
wondering dose she care,
no one around to wipe the tears I cry,
soon...mom I'll rest by your side.
A shorter version of rambling on is some times better
then two long poems don't you think?
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