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Some Passing Tune

SOME PASSING TUNE Listen, my love, rise from the bed with me . . . How can you sleep through night's eternity? You sleep too long, anon our life will break - now is the time to live, eyes be awake! Gaze by the window at crystal clear waning moon, beloved remember nights like this will pass too soon. Count and watch for winking stars in the hoary-domed sky; evening is born of shadows and upon dawn must die. We are aged yes, but still none too wise, for we have moonlight, starlight in our eyes! Caress me dear, be mindless that our time is going to a secret land that is not beyond our knowing. . . Come lean your drowsy head against my shoulder. Hurry, before we are older and the wind grows colder. Cuddle me, our autumn soon will cease to be -- with each passing moment left, ah! be all you are to me! Awake, my long darling -- to be with you - - to stay the lengthiest of lifetime through is much too short, a time to feel, to see your grave, sweet face held close... held close to me! ________________________________ Written: 1st stanza and last: iambic pentameter 2nd, 3rd, 4th: variations from 10, 11, 13, 14 syllables Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper Contest Name: Rock Me Around the Clock or Rock Me to Sleep--Rhythm Poems Placed 4th ©O. E. Guillermo 03:37 pm, December 23, 2014

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:12:00 AM
Olive, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 8:26:00 AM
thank you Skat. "_!
Date: 2/13/2015 7:54:00 PM
So romantic Olive! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:22:00 AM
thanks much Debbie. :)!
Date: 2/13/2015 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Olive, you have a beautiful view of the world you see, a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:25:00 AM
thanks much EVe.. :)!
Date: 2/13/2015 4:38:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Olive. Great beat and words of wisdom to enjoy life while we can. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:20:00 AM
thanks much Sandra.. :)! appreciate it. :)!
Date: 2/13/2015 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Olive_eloi!!! Well done! // paul
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:24:00 AM
thanks much PAul.. :)! hugs!
Date: 2/13/2015 2:13:00 PM
Absolutely delightful read Olive:-) Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:15:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. hugs as well ..:)!
Date: 2/12/2015 11:45:00 PM
this is fantastic, Olive!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/19/2015 8:14:00 AM
thanks so much Andie.. :)! hugs
Date: 2/12/2015 9:25:00 PM
Olive, nice lovely poem, good beat, thanks for entering my contest, congratulations on your placement.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/14/2015 2:50:00 AM
thank you Sheri for the placement... :)
Date: 1/4/2015 9:22:00 AM
A warm, romantic poem; poignant, and full of rich lines. :) john.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 8:14:00 PM
thanks much John.. :) I appreciate it.. :)!
Date: 12/28/2014 4:29:00 AM
very beautifully painted olive i pray you had a good christmas wishing you a happy new year
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Date: 12/29/2014 5:55:00 AM
THanks much Liam ..And to you and your family a blessed CHristmas and a wonderful new year.. :D!
Date: 12/25/2014 10:31:00 PM
Olive,, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/29/2014 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Lolly Linda. :)! hugs and hugs,,, mwah!!! HAppy NEw YEar.. :D!
Date: 12/25/2014 10:20:00 PM
This is simply beautiful, A7 Olive. Merry Christmas to you and all your family! Hugs!
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Date: 12/29/2014 5:50:00 AM
Thanks much BUddy Arthur.. :) Happy New Year.. :)! God bless and stay healthy!
Date: 12/23/2014 2:10:00 PM
Beautiful flow is this poem. The warmth and love simply cascade past my eyes as I read Olive. The mood, the scenes, your words describe, wonderful. It's a wow to read, and I'm delighted to add to my favs. Happy Christmas to you and your family, James :) xx
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:12:00 PM
thanks much James for adding this to your fave. :) God bleds and Haooy Holidays!
Date: 12/23/2014 1:37:00 PM
This is no passing tune, Olive_eloi!! This is a tune that has to linger on as long as possible...its beauty has to be savoured to the full; I love it!! Hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/25/2014 10:11:00 PM
thanks much Paul.. :) this talks about love.... love.. :) hugs and hugs
Date: 12/23/2014 11:09:00 AM
So very beautiful Olive. Very deep and mystical. Have a blessed Christmas.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/23/2014 3:45:00 PM
thanks much Brenda.. :) Happy Christmas too.. ;)
Date: 12/23/2014 2:16:00 AM
Good morning Olive, It is so refreshing to experience a nice intellectual piece like this. I rated it 7. That was very enjoyable Olive. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day. Earl
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/23/2014 3:44:00 PM
thanks much Earl for your kind comments. I appreciate it. :) Have a happy Christmas too.. :)

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