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Some Old Unforgetful Memories

My mother, pregnant,was in the hospital-bed "A baby sister", her once again I reminded. She kissed me and said," Yea" "I'll get you one without delay." Elders laughed at the promise given "God decides those", they said,"not men!" But I dismissed their arguments as utterly absurd For I knew if my mother promised me something, she'd keep her word (After a few days) Many hands led me where a baby screamed "A sister it is!", cried they,"that you always dreamed" But I left the crowd and, crying, to my mother sped "Why here?!", she chided; "I heard you scream more" was all I said.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/11/2012 6:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Neelakantan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2012 3:07:00 AM
Nice verse! I love the way you've included the conversations. Welcome to the Soup Neelakantan!
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