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- Some Love Vampires - I Love the Moon -

I have full moon fever
We all know it is not made of cheese
In a kind of drunk state
I want to dance a ballet on the moon
With romantic views of the
most beautiful astronomical objects in the universe
Nobody drinks tea on such a special day
but a bubbly cold pink champagne

When I've done my dance and greeted all the stars
A golden metal edge rises to the east as the sun rises
Earth calls, it's time for the return journey
The bed is waiting, with a warm blanket filled with white star dust









12/06/2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Sharma Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Wow! What a beautiful picture you wrote! Lovely :)
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:18 PM
- Many thanks for the feedback on my poem, Mansi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Belated Congratulations on your POTD dear Sunshine.. You made me feel and enjoy the heavenly fever and image of the moon! Thank you for sharing. Stay blessed.
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 8:01 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wade Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Such a glorious read and so enjoyable for it's beauty, a well deserved POTD. Faux
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 7:36 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Faux :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Anne-Lise!! How delightfully fresh this poem feels! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:10 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Swartz Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Dance away until dawn! Great poem and congrats on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:09 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on the POTD honor!! I love all you speak of in this very wondrous verse of yours including Vampires, The Moon, and "Bubbly" -- of course!! LOL!! The last two verses are, I think, the perfect ending. Best of Luck in the contest!! Best Always, Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 4:09 AM
- Many thanks for the feedback and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Congrats on POTD Anne-Lise..
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:43 AM
- Many thanks S.O., for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Good to see you back on the podium Anne-Lise, congratulations for POTD honors...
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:42 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 10:38 AM
congratulations on a well deserved POTD
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:41 AM
- Many thanks for the feedback and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 9:31 AM
What an imagination!! Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:41 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Really a cool poem, Anne-Lise, displaying your marvelous imagination. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD:)
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 11:40 AM
- Many thanks Daniel, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ajmal Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Ah such a beautiful poem this is, full of imaginations, many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, it is indeed a beauty and good luck in the contest
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 7:20 AM
- Many thanks for the feedback and congratulations, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Congrats on POTD, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed your poem with its lovely images.
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 6:40 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day..well done, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 6:39 AM
- Vijay, many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 4:36 AM
Such moonlit beauty my friend. Sweetest kiss I have ever gotten was under glowing moonlight and with a cool ocean breeze blowing across a white sand beach.. Congratulations on POTD...
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 5:00 AM
- Robert, many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 3:18 AM
Anne Lise, congratulations... Beautiful...
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 5:00 AM
- Pashang, many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Such a moonful write Anne-Lise...fantastical in its form...Congrats!!! on your POTD!...love and moonlight...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 4:59 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visits, W.W. :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 3:06 AM
Congratulations on POTD on a wonderful poem Anne-Lise. Yes, I love the moon too....Maria hugs
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 4:58 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly congratulations and visits, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 1:58 AM
Congratulations Sunshine, a well deserved POTD. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:54 AM
- Thanks for a nice surprise, Tom :) - Always an honor and pleasure with little stardust :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kapoor Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:46 PM
What a beauty you have painted in this magical write. Excellent one dear friend. With best wishes....Ravindra k Kapoor
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:51 AM
- Many thanks for the feedback on my poem, R.K.K. :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Acrich Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 6:58 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/halloween_vampires_991560
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:47 AM
- SCARY -
Acrich Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 6:57 PM
I have been editing my work and I ran into a vampire poem like you , we will be ready on halloween
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:49 AM
- Thanks, but i love the moon ... not the vampires, Marc :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 4:28 PM
I love the moon too...a fav
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:44 AM
- Many thanks Tim ... a "fav" makes me happy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:55 PM
this poem shows a very nice imagination. Sweet poem.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:02 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:43 PM
a dreamy poetic imagining dear poet...good luck
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:01 PM
- Thank you a lot, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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